General Zod poetry chapbook reviewed

[Will Dockery]

General Zod poetry chapbook reviewed by Rick Howe:

From:
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

[Conley Brothers]

And 27 years later it still stands as a monument to jumbled trash that even one of the local circle jerkers who reviewed it can't understand. Why would you throw George Sulzbach under the bus by dredging this up?

[Will Dockery]

Post by Conley Brothers
And 27 years later it still stands as a monument

<troll snipped>

While you remain nothing but a trashy impostor and identity thief, Fake Conley.

Think about it, anonymous one... you really are nothing.

:)

[Conley Brothers]

Snip restored: And 27 years later it still stands as a monument to jumbled trash that even one of the local circle jerkers who reviewed it can't understand. Why would you throw George Sulzbach under the bus by dredging this up?


Face it, anything you or Zod call your "art" will be sent to the dump soon after you exit this world and are buried in Potter's Field after a ceremony attended by a few drunks.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Conley Brothers
Snip restored

<troll snipped>

Sorry, Fake Conley, but troll posts from an identity thief and impostor should stay snipped.

:)

[Hieronymous Corey]

Think about it, obese one. How often do you respond to nothing, really nothing?

[Will Dockery]

Post by Will Dockery
Think about it

I did... it was an interesting review:

General Zod poetry chapbook reviewed by Rick Howe:

From:
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868.

:)

[Hieronymous Corey]

Look, now you're mad because I called
you obese. You are obese. Deal with it.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Look, now you're mad

I'm not mad at all, just keeping this new thread on track...

Read Rick Howe's review and we can discuss that:

General Zod poetry chapbook reviewed by Rick Howe:

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

[Conley Brothers]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Look, now you're mad

I'm not mad at all, just keeping this new thread on track...
Read Rick Howe's review and we can discuss that

Yet the only discussion you've had about it was "interesting". I've discussed it more than you have.

You spend your time editing other peoples' posts, and denying your obvious obesity.
Do you honestly deny being morbidly obese?

[Hieronymous Corey]

If we can't discuss anything you post-edit, then that's not much of a discussion.

[Conley Brothers]

Will isn't interested in discussion, only disruption.

[Zod]

Rick Howe was too subtle for these trolls Doc...

[Peter J Ross]

In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Sun, 19 May 2019 11:55:28 -0700 (PDT),

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Conley Brothers
And 27 years later it still stands as a monument

<troll snipped>
While you remain nothing but a trashy impostor and identity thief, Fake Conley.
Think about it, anonymous one... you really are nothing.

He's evidently more intelligent and more literate than you are.

If he's nothing, where does that leave you?

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
If we can't discuss anything you post-edit
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

HTH & HAND.

[Conley Brothers]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Hieronymous Corey
If we can't discuss anything you post-edit
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

HTH & HAND.

After you. All you had to say was that it was "interesting", your typical "review". I mused over the fact that even one of your local circle jerkers admitted it was unintelligible crap.
In other words, it's similar to the unintelligible crap you write, hence the reason you found it "interesting".

[Hieronymous Corey]

There's nothing to discuss. The review says the chapbook
is unintelligible crap in the nicest possible way, I agree with
that assessment. I have no idea what you find 'interesting'.

[Zod]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
There's nothing to discuss. The review says the chapbook
is unintelligible

No it did not say that Corey......

From:
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

.....

[Hieronymous Corey]

Yes, it really, really does, George, and if you could read, you'd know that.

[Zod]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Yes, it really, really does, George, and if you could read, you'd know that.

No......

Rick Howe thought on a higher lever than your shallow whines...........

[Hieronymous Corey]

"indistinguishable vortex" "incoherence"

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
Yes, it really, really does, George, and if you could read, you'd know that.

I hate to break it to you, Lady Bunny, but it really, really does.

[Zod]

Post by Will Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

I thank thee Doc.....................

Old Rick Howe was a great friend and deep thinker.....

[Will Dockery]

You post edited out the context, Corey.

😀

[Hieronymous Corey]

No, I didn't. I quoted the author directly, and in context.
The author says the book is incoherent. Incoherent
means, well, if you don't know what incoherent means,
trying to explain incoherence would be an exercise in futility.
The author says it sounds good set to music. Of course, the
telephone book can sound good set to the right music too.

[Will Dockery]

Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

[Hieronymous Corey]

If you can, would you mind writing in complete, coherent sentences, please?
It would make understanding what you're trying to say so much easier. TIA.

[Will Dockery]

If you can, could you please quote text or otherwise let the reader know who you are posting to, Pastor Corey?

TIA.

[Hieronymous Corey]

I do. If you don't think I'm talking to you, don't respond.

[Clay Dockery]

Post by Will Dockery
Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

Neither you or Sulzbach play any instrument well, so you can't write music. I dare either of you to post a video proving me wrong.

[Will Dockery]

This is Usenet, Pastor Corey.

If you post here, you should expect responces.

😀

[Hieronymous Corey]

This is my living room.
I make the rules here.

[Zod]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
This is my living room.
I make the rules here.

We are all here together....

This is not your living room any more than you are here on the river bank with me....

[Will Dockery]

This is a Usenet newsgroup, not our living room, Pastor Corey.

😀

[Hieronymous Corey]

I didn't say this was our living room. This is me typing
on my iPad in my living room while petting my dog,
eating a peanut butter cookie, and listening to television.

[Zod]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
I didn't say this was our living room. This is me typing
on my iPad in my living room while petting my dog,
eating a peanut butter cookie, and listening to television.

You claimed this was your living room and that you made the rules here.....

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Zod

Post by Hieronymous Corey
I didn't say this was our living room. This is me typing
on my iPad in my living room while petting my dog,
eating a peanut butter cookie, and listening to television.

You claimed this was your living room and that you made the rules here.....

The rules are "Shut up Todd."

So shut up Todd.

[Will Dockery]

Point is, you can make the rules there for you and your dog, but not here on the poetry group.

😀

[Hieronymous Corey]

Exactly. I write what I want to write,
when, where and how I want to write it.
You don't have to read anything you don't
want to read, or are unable to comprehend.

[Will Dockery]

Glad to clear your confusion up, Corey.

😀

[Will Dockery]

No, if your writing doesn't make sense, you'll probably be asked to explain, Pastor Corey.

[Hieronymous Corey]

I appreciate your wise counsel. Thanks, and good night.

[Will Dockery]

Have a good one, Pastor Corey.

😀

[Will Dockery]

I'm glad you and Corey don't make the rules here, Pendragon.

:)

[Hieronymous Corey]

My rules don't extend beyond the fingertip I use to type.
No one follows my rules unless they're in my living room,
which is accessible by invitation only, or are comfortable
considering themselves in such intimately close proximity.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
My rules don't extend beyond the fingertip I use to type.
No one follows my rules unless they're in my living room,
which is accessible by invitation only, or are comfortable
considering themselves in such intimately close proximity.

Good afternoon, Pastor Corey.

:)

[Hieronymous Corey]

What's up? I'm busy power washing the deck.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
What's up? I'm busy power washing the deck.

Yes, I remember seeing video of your deck and pool... is it finally warm enough up in Perryville for swimming and so on out back?

I was down in Dothan, Alabama a few days ago, not far from the Gulf Coast beaches I and the locals slip away to often, but didn't have time for the full trip, which includes at least a couple of hours at the beach.

On a sidebar about the trip from Phenix City to Dothan, there's a factory named "Red Star" about halfway there, on Highway 431 (you traveled this road to get to Doo-Nanny) that for a couple of years has been an infamous, bad part of the trip... this factory, right off the highway, puts out just about the worst stink, that covers about a half mile... there's no getting around it, and even rolling the windows up doesn't really help.

Some said it was a paper mill, others said a fertilizer factory and even a solid waste recycle plant... finally looked it up, though, and Googled "red star 431 stink":

https://www.dothaneagle.com/news/residents-near-yeast-plant-sue-over-odor/article_60da29c9-bc7f-52f3-bb7b-611db639a051.html

"Residents near yeast plant sue over odor..."

The suits were filed earlier this year against Redstar Yeast Plant, located north of Headland on U.S. 431.

“The defendants emitted an odor into the surrounding community which was so offensive that it interfered materially with the ordinary comfort of the plaintiff’s existence,” states the complaint filed in U.S. District Court..."

It is rough... just riding through every now and then is a bad experience. Otherwise, the trip has been a pleasant one.

[Hieronymous Corey]

Okay, have a good one. I've got to go check on a couple patients now.

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Hieronymous Corey
What's up? I'm busy power washing the deck.

Yes, I remember seeing video of your deck and pool... is it finally warm enough up in Perryville for swimming and so on out back?
I was down in Dothan, Alabama a few days ago, not far from the Gulf Coast beaches I and the locals slip away to often, but didn't have time for the full trip, which includes at least a couple of hours at the beach.
On a sidebar about the trip from Phenix City to Dothan, there's a factory named "Red Star" about halfway there, on Highway 431 (you traveled this road to get to Doo-Nanny) that for a couple of years has been an infamous, bad part of the trip... this factory, right off the highway, puts out just about the worst stink, that covers about a half mile... there's no getting around it, and even rolling the windows up doesn't really help.

The yeast plant has been there for over 25 years, dickwit.
I remember smelling it before I moved from Atlanta.
If was built a few years after my family built a cotton gin in Abbeville and that was almost 30 years ago.
You don’t get to Dothan, let alone PCB, very much do you, old son?

Post by Will Dockery
https://www.dothaneagle.com/news/residents-near-yeast-plant-sue-over-odor/article_60da29c9-bc7f-52f3-bb7b-611db639a051.html
"Residents near yeast plant sue over odor..."
The suits were filed earlier this year against Redstar Yeast Plant, located north of Headland on U.S. 431.
“The defendants emitted an odor into the surrounding community which was so offensive that it interfered materially with the ordinary comfort of the plaintiff’s existence,” states the complaint filed in U.S. District Court..."
It is rough... just riding through every now and then is a bad experience. Otherwise, the trip has been a pleasant one.

Did the plaintiffs win their lawsuit?

[Dental River]

Post by ME

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Hieronymous Corey
What's up? I'm busy power washing the deck.

Yes, I remember seeing video of your deck and pool... is it finally warm enough up in Perryville for swimming and so on out back?
I was down in Dothan, Alabama a few days ago, not far from the Gulf Coast beaches I and the locals slip away to often, but didn't have time for the full trip, which includes at least a couple of hours at the beach.
On a sidebar about the trip from Phenix City to Dothan, there's a factory named "Red Star" about halfway there, on Highway 431 (you traveled this road to get to Doo-Nanny) that for a couple of years has been an infamous, bad part of the trip... this factory, right off the highway, puts out just about the worst stink, that covers about a half mile... there's no getting around it, and even rolling the windows up doesn't really help.

The yeast plant has been there for over 25 years, dickwit.
I remember smelling it before I moved from Atlanta.
If was built a few years after my family built a cotton gin in Abbeville and that was almost 30 years ago.
You don’t get to Dothan, let alone PCB, very much do you, old son?

"...not far from the Gulf Coast beaches where I and the locals slip away to often" is the funniest part of this for some reason.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Dental River
"...not far from the Gulf Coast beaches where I and the locals slip away to often" is the funniest part of this for some reason.

Well, it isn't Fire Island but that's okay, really.

:)

[Will Dockery]

Post by Hieronymous Corey
What's up? I'm busy power washing the deck.

I was going to offer to help until I saw you typed deck instead of dick.

[Conley Brothers]

And still no commentary or discussion from Will Dockery about Sulzbach's shitty crap book. All he does is troll like the troll he is.

BTW George, Rick really did say your work was a hot mess. You can't think clearly, so why should anyone expect you to write clearly?

[Will Dockery]

Okay, take care and see you later, Pastor Corey.

😉

[Will Dockery]

I wrote that many of us have smelled the place for years, just now looked it up.

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery
I wrote that many of us have smelled the place for years, just now looked it up.

Y’all are a bit slow on the uptake then aren’t you.
Fuck, millions have smelt the yeast plant. And most would probably ask “What the fuck is that smell” and anyone within a 90 mile radius could tell them.

[Will Dockery]

Many trips to Florida are best taking the Georgia routes, skipping Alabama entirety.

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery
Many trips to Florida are best taking the Georgia routes, skipping Alabama entirety.

Even most people from Atlanta take 431 to PCB, you moron.
You can’t help yourself can you?
All the years I lived in the Atlanta area, that was the best route. You must not have there much pissbum.
Or you wouldn’t have brought up your little side-bar ‘tidbit’.
Stick to what you know, dumb ass.

[Will Dockery]

Post by ME

Post by Will Dockery
Many trips to Florida are best taking the Georgia routes, skipping Alabama entirety.

Even most people from Atlanta take 431 to PCB

If you really want to know, most of my Florida visits do not include Panama City at all.

Saint Augustine was my home twice in my life, and Saint George Island is a favorite.

So, you live down that way, in Bainbridge, so the story goes. So of course you'll know more about your area than an outsider like me.

So you're spoiling for a fight, "Me"... what else is new?

:)

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by ME

Post by Will Dockery
Many trips to Florida are best taking the Georgia routes, skipping Alabama entirety.

Even most people from Atlanta take 431 to PCB

If you really want to know, most of my Florida visits do not include Panama City at all.
Saint Augustine was my home twice in my life, and Saint George Island is a favorite.
So, you live down that way, in Bainbridge, so the story goes. So of course you'll know more about your area than an outsider like me.
So you're spoiling for a fight, "Me"... what else is new?
:)

Just stating the facts, pissbum
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

Glad I could clear it up for you though.

[Zod]

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....

Known by many as Cop Alley....


Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

[ME]

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

[Zod]

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Speed traps all up and down that way.......

You must know that......

[ME]

Post by Zod

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Speed traps all up and down that way.......
You must know that......

Headland, Newville .......
And it’s called law enforcement.

[ME]

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Sorry. I should have typed 431.

[Zod]

Post by ME

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Sorry. I should have typed 431.

Average drivers need to watch their speed headed up or down Highway 431.

You might be an exception ME....

[ME]

Post by Zod

Post by ME

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Sorry. I should have typed 431.

Average drivers need to watch their speed headed up or down Highway 431.
You might be an exception ME....

I am an average and responsible driver, zid . Therefore, I have no issues with law enforcement doing their jobs on a popular destination route.
And if inferring that I’m exceptional, you’d be correct.

[Clay Dockery]

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME

Post by ME

Post by Zod

Post by ME
You claimed in your post that you go often to the gulf coast of Florida.
You also live less than 90 miles from the yeast plant you brought up in your sidebar.

That is all true but many locals also know to avoid the stretch of 431 Doc mentioned.....
Known by many as Cop Alley....
Easier to ease out Victory Drive and take a right (south) just past Cusseta....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cusseta,_Georgia

The people I know and probably the majority of those traveling on that stretch of 43, don’t usually need to avoid Cop Ally.....
But if y’all have to ease out town (which in y’all’s case would be almost never) that’s still not something to brag about.

Sorry. I should have typed 431.

Average drivers need to watch their speed headed up or down Highway 431.
You might be an exception ME....

I am an average and responsible driver, zid . Therefore, I have no issues with law enforcement doing their jobs on a popular destination route.
And if inferring that I’m exceptional, you’d be correct.

George and Will have not owned a car in many years. They are talking out of their ass.

[Zod]

Stretch of 43?

I think you have the wrong road ME....

[Will Dockery]

Where you live you don't even use that part of 431 do you, "Me"?

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery
Where you live you don't even use that part of 431 do you, "Me"?

But I have used that route for decades, dipshit. And still use when visiting family and friends in that part of southeastern part of Alabama.
You don’t go south of Phenix City much do you?
But your right. I’m more acquainted with that area than you are.
I’ve had a vested interest in that area for a few decades.

But hey......
It’s just a stretch of highway, used by millions of travelers that are beach bound yearlong.
But, they do stay more than just ‘a couple of hours’.
You and your buds can’t splurge for a hotel room?
Now that’s sad.

[Will Dockery]

I will remind you, "Me", that you're an anonymous, obsessive troll... you can claim to be anything you want to, yet remain nothing but a troll.

😊

[ME]

Post by Will Dockery
I will remind you, "Me", that you're an anonymous, obsessive troll... you can claim to be anything you want to, yet remain nothing but a troll.
😊

No, pissbum, you can call ME an anonymous troll, but that doesn’t make ME one.
And I actually know more about this than you do, evidently.
Glad I could clear this issue up for you.
HTH

[ME]

Post by ME

Post by Will Dockery
I will remind you, "Me", that you're an anonymous, obsessive troll... you can claim to be anything you want to, yet remain nothing but a troll.
😊

No, pissbum, you can call ME an anonymous troll, but that doesn’t make ME one.
And I actually know more about this than you do, evidently.
Glad I could clear this issue up for you.
HTH

No it’s not.
That’s only your opinion.

[Will Dockery]

You're a troll.

You're anonymous.

End of story, "Me".

😀

[Will Dockery]

"Me":

You're anonymous.

You're an obsessed troll who stalked me here from Topix Forums.

Everyone here knows that by now.

😀

[Will Dockery]

You're a malicious impostor troll with a negative agenda anyway, so any video I posted would be subject to your biased, subjective opinion anyway.I

😀

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Will Dockery
You're a malicious impostor troll with a negative agenda anyway, so any video I posted would be subject to your biased, subjective opinion anyway.I

It's obvious that neither of you own a car, Will.

You describe how you *walk* to the coffee shop every morning, and how you *walk* past the gym. And as to Lady Bunny... she live in a wall-less tent in a hobo camp.

[Will Dockery]

What's having a car got to do with anything?

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Will Dockery
What's having a car got to do with anything?

Learn to read, dumbfuck.

Clay said that neither of you have owned a car in many years. You called Clay a "malicious impostor troll."

Contextually, it follows that you were referring to his statement about he car.

[Zod]

Post by Michael Pendragon
Clay said

That was not Clay but actually an impostor troll.....

Don't lie or play stupid Pendragon ........

You know that.....

[Coco DeSockmonkey]

Post by Zod

Post by Michael Pendragon
Clay said

That was not Clay but actually an impostor troll.....
Don't lie or play stupid Pendragon ........
You know that.....

The poster used the name "Clay." I referred to him by his username.

Nor does it matter whether he is "Clay Dockery" or "Clay Aiken" -- the point is that neither of you own a car, so whoever he may be, he spoke the truth.

[Zod]

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

Post by Zod

Post by Michael Pendragon
Clay said

That was not Clay but actually an impostor troll.....
Don't lie or play stupid Pendragon ........
You know that.....

The poster used the name "Clay

But you damn well that is not who is really posting....

You know it is an impostor troll....

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Zod

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

Post by Zod

Post by Michael Pendragon
Clay said

That was not Clay but actually an impostor troll.....
Don't lie or play stupid Pendragon ........
You know that.....

The poster used the name "Clay

But you damn well that is not who is really posting....
You know it is an impostor troll....

The poster's username is "Clay."

Do you know what a username is, Lady Bunny?

[Conley Brothers]

Post by Zod

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

Post by Zod

Post by Michael Pendragon
Clay said

That was not Clay but actually an impostor troll.....
Don't lie or play stupid Pendragon ........
You know that.....

The poster used the name "Clay

But you damn well that is not who is really posting....
You know it is an impostor troll....

It doesn't matter. You and Doc have sown no musical talent whatsoever. He's been challenged to post a video of him playing guitar. I'll challenge you to do the same but you can't. There are plenty of opportunities at open mic karaoke night to do so.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Conley Brothers
You and Doc have sown no musical talent whatsoeve

Writes an anonymous troll too cowardly to use their real name, and too unoriginal to think of a moniker of their own.

You're simply a pathetic impostor.

:)

[Zod]

Post by Clay Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

Neither you or Sulzbach play any instrument well

The review states otherwise.....

Post by Clay Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

....

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

Neither you or Sulzbach play any instrument well

The review states otherwise.....

No, it doesn't.

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

....

[Will Dockery]

Post by Michael Pendragon

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

Neither you or Sulzbach play any instrument well

The review states otherwise.....

No, it doesn't.

Rick Howe does seem to give a positive response to Zod's recorded work.

Post by Michael Pendragon

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano

All this, definitely not a bad critique of Zod's music.

-one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

.... ....

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Michael Pendragon

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Considering Zod wrote the music, as well...

Neither you or Sulzbach play any instrument well

The review states otherwise.....

No, it doesn't.

Rick Howe does seem to give a positive response to Zod's recorded work.

Post by Michael Pendragon

Post by Zod

Post by Clay Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904
http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, Id on't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it. Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano

All this, definitely not a bad critique of Zod's music.

You're right. It's a fairly accurate critique of Lady Bunny's work. It's just not a positive one!

[Will Dockery]

I see positive elements in Howe's review.

[Michelangelo Scarlotti]

Post by Will Dockery
I see positive elements in Howe's review.

"He's as blind as he can be
Just sees what he wants to see"

You mean that Howe condemned it politely, when he might well have given it the horselaugh?

[Will Dockery]

I don't think Howe condemned Zod's poetry.

[Zod]

Post by Will Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Will Dockery
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Apt depiction of my vision...

Post by Will Dockery
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea,

Again an apt description and not at all a bad review... just descriptive.

Post by Will Dockery
whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex.

Again... Rick Howe notes the difficult form of my poetry and art....

Post by Will Dockery
Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically-

There you go.... the money shot.....

Post by Will Dockery
and you should hear it set to music!

Perhaps many never will.... most of my recordings are lost to time.....

Post by Will Dockery
The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance.

Apt and not at all a BAD review... just descriptive of the dark nature of my poetry and art.....

Post by Will Dockery
Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.

Howe gets to the heart of the darkness here....

Post by Will Dockery
If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality.

Zing....

Post by Will Dockery
On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

I thank thee my long lost friend Rick Howe..............

[Michelangelo Scarlotti]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Will Dockery
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Apt depiction of my vision...

Post by Will Dockery
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea,

Again an apt description and not at all a bad review... just descriptive.

Post by Will Dockery
whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex.

Again... Rick Howe notes the difficult form of my poetry and art....

Post by Will Dockery
Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically-

There you go.... the money shot.....

Post by Will Dockery
and you should hear it set to music!

Perhaps many never will.... most of my recordings are lost to time.....

Post by Will Dockery
The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance.

Apt and not at all a BAD review... just descriptive of the dark nature of my poetry and art.....

Post by Will Dockery
Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.

Howe gets to the heart of the darkness here....

Post by Will Dockery
If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality.

Zing....

Post by Will Dockery
On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

I thank thee my long lost friend Rick Howe..............

It's called damning with faint praise, Bunny.

Howe called your work an incoherent mess where any intended meaning gets lost in the swirling swill.

[Zod]

Post by Michelangelo Scarlotti

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Will Dockery
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Apt depiction of my vision...

Post by Will Dockery
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea,

Again an apt description and not at all a bad review... just descriptive.

Post by Will Dockery
whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex.

Again... Rick Howe notes the difficult form of my poetry and art....

Post by Will Dockery
Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically-

There you go.... the money shot.....

Post by Will Dockery
and you should hear it set to music!

Perhaps many never will.... most of my recordings are lost to time.....

Post by Will Dockery
The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance.

Apt and not at all a BAD review... just descriptive of the dark nature of my poetry and art.....

Post by Will Dockery
Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.

Howe gets to the heart of the darkness here....

Post by Will Dockery
If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality.

Zing....

Post by Will Dockery
On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

I thank thee my long lost friend Rick Howe..............

It's called

No it was quite an insightful review.............

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Zod

Post by Michelangelo Scarlotti

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Will Dockery
*2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos, or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Apt depiction of my vision...

Post by Will Dockery
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury. It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea,

Again an apt description and not at all a bad review... just descriptive.

Post by Will Dockery
whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex.

Again... Rick Howe notes the difficult form of my poetry and art....

Post by Will Dockery
Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically-

There you go.... the money shot.....

Post by Will Dockery
and you should hear it set to music!

Perhaps many never will.... most of my recordings are lost to time.....

Post by Will Dockery
The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance.

Apt and not at all a BAD review... just descriptive of the dark nature of my poetry and art.....

Post by Will Dockery
Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.

Howe gets to the heart of the darkness here....

Post by Will Dockery
If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality.

Zing....

Post by Will Dockery
On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

I thank thee my long lost friend Rick Howe..............

It's called

No it was quite an insightful review.............

No one's denying that, Bunny.

[Will Dockery]

Post by Zod
No it was quite an insightful review.............
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Zod
"2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos

This obviously describes most Zod poetry to this day.

Post by Zod
or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Howe saw these poems and art as some heavy stuff, as it is.

Post by Zod
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury.

This makes me want to find this chapbook but I'm not sure if I even have a copy in my collection.

Post by Zod
It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

Rick Howe was a damn fine writer, his work is missed.

[Michael Pendragon]

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Zod
No it was quite an insightful review.............
Issue 4; November 1, 1992 TOPICAL STUDIES © Rick Howe Woodland Circle Columbus, GA 31904

http://unitedfanzineorganization.weebly.com/uploads/4/5/6/0/4560933/topical4.pdf

Post by Zod
"2" : $2.50 ; G. J. Sulzbach III, P. O.Box xxxx, Phenix City, AL 36868. This one is not easy to describe. It has art -psychedelic totems, like - and poetry. The poetry is like a prophecy of chaos

This obviously describes most Zod poetry to this day.

Post by Zod
or, I don't know what. Mostly it's like same dark turbulent force sweeping all before it.

Howe saw these poems and art as some heavy stuff, as it is.

I'm getting the image of sludge overflowing from a septic tank.

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Zod
Now and then a fleeting image can be recognized as if in a flash of lightning before it too gets swallowed in the receding fury.

This makes me want to find this chapbook but I'm not sure if I even have a copy in my collection.

Doubtful. Why would you keep a chapbook that didn't mention or include you?

Post by Will Dockery

Post by Zod
It might be soldiers forming up for war, or a lone wanderer in a desert in Mexico, waves crashing at sea, whatever; it all tends to sink into the indistinguishable vortex. Despite incoherence the book makes its mark artistically- and you should hear it set to music! The tape is apparently not yet released but I've heard it and I tell you,' it is an experience.You sort of feel like you're huddled in some bunker somewhere on a devastated landscape,rumbling thunder and cannons in the distance. Somber vocals and a kind of dirge like piano -one thing this is not meant to be is funny.If anything it conveys a sense of eerie truthfulness, like someone urging you to put aside cheerful delusions and contemplate a more dreadful reality. On the whole this may be George Sulzbach's most serious work to date,whether the world is ready for it or not.

Rick Howe was a damn fine writer, his work is missed.

Damn fine? Hardly. He's almost semi-literate, which puts him a step above you.