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orig. non-altered 'la nuit" poem with new old additions and new title
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cheesetray
2024-05-16 12:29:14 UTC
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DE: LA NUIT


night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
.
.
.
it’s raining hardER now



golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the nose post....)
2.28.2016

(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
cheesetray
2024-05-16 12:54:09 UTC
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special prize to whomever gets it....there's something......
cheesetray
2024-05-16 12:55:12 UTC
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Timothy S......you here ?

You might know...
cheesetray
2024-05-16 13:20:17 UTC
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to be fair to golda....i added that in rote, and i screwed up.

it's supposed to be (with no special number in mind)

it's raining hardER now........

(dots trailing off.....)
%
2024-05-16 16:24:16 UTC
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to be fair to golda (aka rachel)....
talk about yourself in the third person much, you ditzy twat?
cheesetray
2024-05-16 21:26:24 UTC
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when i say new title, i mean relatively....did it a few months ago (or whatever)
Golda
2024-05-16 22:46:15 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUI
night falls
rain pitter-patter
on the roo
droplets of wate
splash above my hea
and spil
like tear
onto the groun
i mysel
stay dr
insid
like a ston
who can not cr
the rai
will be my tear
the rai
will cry for m
as i stan
inside dr
all alon
.
.
.
it’s raining hardER no
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near th
nose post....
Post by cheesetray
2.28.201
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've hear
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?

there wa
an old woman who lived in a sho


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cheesetray
2024-05-17 15:40:08 UTC
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la nuit

night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone


golda
2.28.2016
cheesetray
2024-05-17 21:45:57 UTC
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i actually made a mistake i meant to post that without the pitter...

but that was a suggestion, anyway, not my own emendation.

and the real title is waiting for you
cheesetray
2024-05-17 22:00:35 UTC
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waiting for you

night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone

2.28.2016
Rachel
cheesetray
2024-05-17 22:08:36 UTC
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la nuit


night falls
rain patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone


golda
2016
cheesetray
2024-05-16 12:56:28 UTC
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oh g-d i did it again, didn't i.

special prize to whomever.

but if i tack on gets it, it's he who gets it, implied, hence whoever gets it.

well, it's the correct instinct at least....
W.Dockery
2024-05-26 11:22:30 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUIT
night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
..
..
..
it’s raining hardER now
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the nose post....)
2.28.2016
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard recently
that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
I don't remember the frog myth, can you remind me?
Golda
2024-05-26 15:50:44 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUI
night falls
rain pitter-patter
on the roo
droplets of wate
splash above my hea
and spil
like tear
onto the groun
i mysel
stay dr
insid
like a ston
who can not cr
the rai
will be my tear
the rai
will cry for m
as i stan
inside dr
all alon
.
.
.
it’s raining hardER no
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near th
nose post....
Post by cheesetray
2.28.201
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've hear
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?

Wil
Dockery
Post Posted: Sun May 26 2024 6:22 a
Post subject: Re: orig. non-altered 'la nuit" poem with new ol
additions and new titl
cheesetray wrote

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DE: LA NUI


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night fall
rain pitter-patter
on the roo
droplets of wate
splash above my hea
and spil
like tear
onto the groun
i mysel
stay dr
insid
like a ston
who can not cr
the rai
will be my tear
the rai
will cry for m
as i stan
inside dr
all alon
W.Dockery
2024-06-25 22:31:49 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUIT
night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
..
..
..
it’s raining hardER now
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the nose post....)
2.28.2016
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard recently
that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
Hello Rachel, I hope you're doing okay.
cheesetray
2024-06-26 23:28:18 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUI
night falls
rain pitter-patter
on the roo
droplets of wate
splash above my hea
and spil
like tear
onto the groun
i mysel
stay dr
insid
like a ston
who can not cr
the rai
will be my tear
the rai
will cry for m
as i stan
inside dr
all alon
.
.
.
it’s raining hardER no
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near th
nose post....
Post by cheesetray
2.28.201
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've hear
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?

i promise
my mother i would never say to her that i wanted to kill myself agai
(after this last injury) and also, that i wouldn't do it as long a
she was alive, so yeah, well, i'm living

anyway, the upcoming belated shavuot poem will be posted on hallowee

and it's more like liner notes, and tarantula a little, and just goe
on and on, it's 10 1/2 pages


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W.Dockery
2024-06-27 03:39:46 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUIT
night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
..
..
..
it’s raining hardER now
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
Post by cheesetray
2.28.2016
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
i promised
my mother i would never say to her that i wanted to kill myself again
(after this last injury) and also, that i wouldn't do it as long as
she was alive, so yeah, well, i'm living.
anyway, the upcoming belated shavuot poem will be posted on halloween
and it's more like liner notes, and tarantula a little, and just goes
on and on, it's 10 1/2 pages.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=665456099#665456099
"Some other kinds of songs."
Will-Dockery
2024-06-26 23:28:19 UTC
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i promised my mother i would never say to her that i wanted t
kill myself again (after this last injury) and also, that i wouldn'
do it as long as she was alive, so yeah, well, i'm living
anyway, the upcoming belated shavuot poem will be posted o
hallowee
and it's more like liner notes, and tarantula a little, and jus
goes on and on, it's 10 1/2 pages

Great news




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cheesetray
2024-06-29 03:52:39 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUI
night falls
rain pitter-patter
on the roo
droplets of wate
splash above my hea
and spil
like tear
onto the groun
i mysel
stay dr
insid
like a ston
who can not cr
the rai
will be my tear
the rai
will cry for m
as i stan
inside dr
all alon
.
.
.
it’s raining hardER no
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near th
nose post....
Post by cheesetray
2.28.201
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've hear
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?

DE: LA NUI
is misappropriated to golda it's by rache


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%
2024-06-30 17:05:51 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
DE: LA NUIT
night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
..
..
..
it’s raining hardER now
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
Post by cheesetray
2.28.2016
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
DE: LA NUIT
is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
both golda and rachel are the same asshole

HTH/HAND
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W.Dockery
2024-07-01 00:35:32 UTC
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DE: LA NUIT
night falls
rain pitter-patters
on the roof
droplets of water
splash above my head
and spill
like tears
onto the ground
i myself
stay dry
inside
like a stone
who can not cry
the rain
will be my tears
the rain
will cry for me
as i stand
inside dry
all alone
..
..
..
it’s raining hardER now
golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
Post by cheesetray
2.28.2016
(i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
DE: LA NUIT
is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
both golda and rachel are the same
How would you know?
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HTH/HAND
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%
2024-07-01 08:29:34 UTC
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  > DE: LA NUIT
  >
  >
  > night falls
  > rain pitter-patters
  > on the roof
  > droplets of water
  > splash above my head
  > and spill
  > like tears
  > onto the ground
  > i myself
  > stay dry
  > inside
  > like a stone
  > who can not cry
  > the rain
  > will be my tears
  > the rain
  > will cry for me
  > as i stand
  > inside dry
  > all alone
  > ..
  > ..
  > ..
  > it’s raining hardER now
  >
  >
  >
  > golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
  > 2.28.2016
  >
  > (i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
DE: LA NUIT
is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
both golda and rachel are the same asshole
How would you know?
anyone with half a brain knows that, dimbulb
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HTH/HAND
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W.Dockery
2024-07-01 11:34:37 UTC
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  > DE: LA NUIT
  >
  >
  > night falls
  > rain pitter-patters
  > on the roof
  > droplets of water
  > splash above my head
  > and spill
  > like tears
  > onto the ground
  > i myself
  > stay dry
  > inside
  > like a stone
  > who can not cry
  > the rain
  > will be my tears
  > the rain
  > will cry for me
  > as i stand
  > inside dry
  > all alone
  > ..
  > ..
  > ..
  > it’s raining hardER now
  >
  >
  >
  > golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
  > 2.28.2016
  >
  > (i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
DE: LA NUIT
is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
both golda and rachel are the same asshole
How would you know?
anyone with half a brain knows that, dimbulb
No, you're just a troll making a guess.

HTH and HAND.
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Jim
2024-07-01 15:57:23 UTC
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  > DE: LA NUIT
  >
  >
  > night falls
  > rain pitter-patters
  > on the roof
  > droplets of water
  > splash above my head
  > and spill
  > like tears
  > onto the ground
  > i myself
  > stay dry
  > inside
  > like a stone
  > who can not cry
  > the rain
  > will be my tears
  > the rain
  > will cry for me
  > as i stand
  > inside dry
  > all alone
  > ..
  > ..
  > ..
  > it’s raining hardER now
  >
  >
  >
  > golda (alternate ending from bright beginnings notebook, near the
nose post....)
  > 2.28.2016
  >
  > (i should call this this frog in boiling water, but i've heard
recently that's a myth anyway....does anyone know?)
DE: LA NUIT
is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
both golda and rachel are the same asshole
 >
Post by W.Dockery
How would you know?
 >
 >
 >
anyone with half a brain knows that, dimbulb
No, you're just a troll making a guess.
Golda and Rachel are most certainly the same person.
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Will-Dockery
2024-06-29 03:52:39 UTC
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DE: LA NUIT is misappropriated to golda it's by rache
Thanks for the update


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W.Dockery
2024-07-01 00:50:42 UTC
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DE: LA NUIT is misappropriated to golda it's by rachel
Thanks for the update.
Glad to see you back on the group, also

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