Picture Book Stares Back / Will Dockery

Post by Will Dockery
Picture Book Stares Back
Until 21 years later
you wake up
and it is all
like a long ago nightmare.
Too late to repair.
No apologies
will ever be enough.
Nothing left
but a brave face,
laughing at
the beautiful evil.
-Will Dockery

I like this one, Will. I made a couple of punctuation edits, but otherwise good.

Will Dockery

2017-12-29 12:05:58 UTC

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

I like this one, Will. I made a couple of punctuation edits, but otherwise good.

Thanks, Pendragon, and thanks for the edit, looks good.

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-01 01:22:17 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Supposedly.

"Supposedly"?

Was that the name of the poem of mine you say you wrote a critique of, Corey?

You must be a psychic after all, since I won't have written the poems titled "Charming" and "Supposedly" until well into 2018.

:D

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:36:46 UTC

Not important to me, no.

😀

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:39:53 UTC

It must be at last somewhat important to you.
You're the one who repeatedly brings it up.

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:45:16 UTC

"At last somewhat"?

😀

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:50:05 UTC

Duh? Jew gossa prolem wit dat, dikhed?

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:52:21 UTC

No, it isn't important enough to me to be a problem.

😀

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:54:04 UTC

Yes, you said that, twice in this thread, for emphasis, I'm sure.

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 01:03:25 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
It must be at last somewhat important

Do you mean it must /finally/ be important, or what?

No, it isn't important yet.

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 01:07:36 UTC

It means you're a old Splooge face, that's what.
Splooge. Splooge. Splooge. Splooge. Splooge.

Will Dockery

2018-01-07 05:32:15 UTC

Post by Coco DeSockmonkey

I like this one, Will. I made a couple of punctuation edits, but otherwise good.

Thanks again, Pendragon.

And thanks for the edit... I'll be using this version in future postings, looks good.

:)

Will Dockery

2017-12-29 12:33:38 UTC

Travis, I think this poem came from a place similar to your new one, not a pretty scene, but art is not always pretty.

treerattrav

2017-12-29 20:21:05 UTC

Post by Will Dockery
Travis, I think this poem came from a place similar to your new one, not a pretty scene, but art is not always pretty.

Yeah, that is often the case I really enjoyed this one

Will Dockery

2017-12-30 13:46:05 UTC

Post by treerattrav

Post by Will Dockery
Travis, I think this poem came from a place similar to your new one, not a pretty scene, but art is not always pretty.

Yeah, that is often the case I really enjoyed this one

Thanks for reading, glad you liked the poem, Travis.

:)

Will Dockery

2017-12-30 23:34:49 UTC

Thanks again for the honest reads and reviews.

😀

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 11:37:38 UTC

Hello Corey... how about this one?

:)

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 11:42:17 UTC

How about this one what?

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 11:47:02 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
How about this one what?

Do you have any comments on my poem, in return fr the ones I made on yours, yesterday?

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 11:51:09 UTC

In return for? Seriously? That's how you see it?
No, I do not have any comments on your poem
in return for the ones you say you made yesterday.

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 11:57:02 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
In return for? Seriously? That's how you see it?
No, I do not have any comments on your poem
in return for the ones you say you made yesterday.

I commented a dozen times on the "Phoenix Rising" thread.

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 12:03:49 UTC

Seriously? That's what you call "commenting" on a poem?
Okay, so. Never mind. Please don't bother commenting on
any of my poems or threads anymore. They're all very silly,
except of course for those that aren't, and unworthy of your
time and consideration, which I know is valuable to you by
how you've spent so much of it. How's that for a resolution?

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 12:36:53 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Seriously? That's what you call "commenting" on a poem?
Okay, so. Never mind. Please don't bother commenting on
any of my poems or threads anymore. They're all very silly,
except of course for those that aren't, and unworthy of your
time and consideration, which I know is valuable to you by
how you've spent so much of it. How's that for a resolution?

Not true, I've named three of your poems that I consider outstanding work, worthy even of being on the George Dance blog:

1) Phoenix Rising
2) Angel's Song
3) The Haunted Room

Oh yeah, I also enjoyed "Doppler Effect", and commented on that poem as well.

Okay, so, there you go.

Your turn to comment on my poetry now, Corey.

:D

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 12:38:08 UTC

I just did. I wouldn't have my poetry on George Dance's blog if I were you.

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 12:40:05 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
I just did. I wouldn't have my poetry on George Dance's blog if I were you.

You removed your poems from the George Dance blog, correct?

Brooke

2018-01-03 00:45:24 UTC

1) Phoenix Rising
2) Angel's Song
3) The Haunted Room
Oh yeah, I also enjoyed "Doppler Effect", and commented on that poem as well.
Okay, so, there you go.
Your turn to comment on my poetry now, Corey.
:D

Lol @ worthy. It's just some creepy old guy with a website. There are hundreds, if not thousands of such sites, most with more traffic. You can even post to them if you aren't banned like you are on at least one for your plagiarism after being found guilty by a juror of your peers.

Will Dockery #plagiarist

Will Dockery

2018-01-03 00:47:58 UTC

Are you saying Corey is creepy?

Brooke

2018-01-03 23:13:08 UTC

Are you saying Corey is creepy?

We were talking about his "worthiness" of inclusion on George DancesWithChildren's blahg. Do try harder to follow a simple conversation.

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-03 23:42:16 UTC

Try harder? Really? That's your best advice?
You're a real heartless bitch, aren't you? Do
you really think simply trying harder will have
any effect on his ability to follow a conversation?
Trust me, it won't, because it's not a matter of
effort. He tries as hard as he can, but has a
significantly limited capacity to comprehend.

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:13:07 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
significantly limited capacity to comprehend

Writes J. Corey Connor, the man who constantly complains about how he "does not understand."

Besides, Charles Bukowski said "Don't try."

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:18:02 UTC

See what I mean? He makes my point
far more convincingly than I ever could.
Shame on you, Brooke! Shame! Shame!

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:20:08 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
See what I mean?

Nobody can see anything since you snipped my response from your post.

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:23:34 UTC

I guess you'll have to go back and
delete your post so nobody will know
what I was talking about, right?

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 00:30:17 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
I guess you'll have to go back and
delete your post so nobody will know
what I was talking about, right?

Oh, you won't be deleting your post, as usual, Corey?

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-04 00:35:33 UTC

Why, is that important?

Will Dockery

2018-01-10 03:15:03 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Why, is that important?

Is what important?

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 02:39:41 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
You're a real heartless bitch

It's just an act.

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-10 03:14:11 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Trust me

I'm not so sure that's a very good idea.

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-10 02:52:49 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
How about this one what?

The poem, probably.

Will Dockery

2018-01-11 03:40:08 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
How about this one what?

I don't know, you'll have to tell me.

Will Dockery

2018-01-13 02:31:01 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
How about this one what?

This poem.

How about reading and commenting on this one?

Will Dockery

2018-01-23 23:44:27 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
How about this one what?

Say what?

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 20:26:11 UTC

Again, here, you suddenly vanished without or before answering my question, Corey.

😀

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 20:35:45 UTC

Wasn't your question answered elsewhere?
What do you not know that you want to know?

2017-12-31 21:16:42 UTC

Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago. Then when Rachel asked if that's all I had, I pointed out several things including that my claim to fame didn't revolve around a supposed rape by bob dylan.

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 21:19:09 UTC

Yes, I saw that. Charming.

Rachel

2017-12-31 21:21:50 UTC

Post by Me
Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago. Then when Rachel asked if that's all I had, I pointed out several things including that my claim to fame didn't revolve around a supposed rape by bob dylan.

what 3 liner? this is all lies. i didn't write a 3 line poem, did it?

Rachel

2017-12-31 21:22:16 UTC

Post by Rachel

what 3 liner? this is all lies. i didn't write a 3 line poem, did it?

sorry, i was typing so quickly i meant did i...

Will Dockery

2018-01-01 18:26:06 UTC

Post by Rachel

what 3 liner? this is all lies. i didn't write a 3 line poem, did it?

sorry, i was typing so quickly i meant did i...

Sounds more like a Haiku... here's your poem:

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/SgmQo-YOCgAJ

"Generation - Opening Doors"

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-01 12:56:54 UTC

Post by Me

Post by Me
Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes

Bullshit, of course, as usual.

Post by Me
that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago. Then when Rachel asked if that's all I had, I pointed out several things
what 3 liner? this is all lies. i didn't write a 3 line poem, did it?

Well, Rachel, here it is, let's have a look:

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/SgmQo-YOCgAJ

"Generation - Opening Doors"

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 18:07:20 UTC

Post by Rachel

what 3 liner? this is all lies.

Considering the source, I'd expect nothing less.

driveby

2017-12-31 21:25:48 UTC

Actually she said "do you have anything at all"...a silly notion, of course considering the source...both your poems were worth the read, for me anyway...fuck the rest, for a day.

Will Dockery

2018-01-01 06:34:05 UTC

Post by Me
Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes

If by "he" you mean me, I didn't "bury" your poem. Here it is, let everybody have a look at your poem:

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/ru4KzGwQCgAJ

As with your other poems you've posted, "Me", I refrain from critiquing it, but I sure don't mind the others, Corey, Jim Senetto, Pendragon, reading and commenting on it.

:)

Will Dockery

2018-01-02 21:11:44 UTC

Post by Me
Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes

George, this will take you straight to the "Untitled" poem by "Me":

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/ru4KzGwQCgAJ

Post by Will Dockery
As with your other poems you've posted, "Me", I refrain from critiquing it, but I sure don't mind the others, Corey, Jim Senetto, Pendragon, reading and commenting on it.
:)

And the link to this post:

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/2Gh5gcyEjGY/B-QeDYwxCgAJ

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 18:06:08 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

I wondered why Pedodragon suddenly started claiming that you "wrote poetry", ASS. This must be what he's talking about. Do you have a link, a title, or anything that might allow someone to read this alleged poem? Or are you just going to tell us how good it was?

c***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 18:23:44 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Yesterday

2018-01-02 18:33:23 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 18:59:16 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

Yesterday

2018-01-02 19:00:25 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 19:23:40 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends

He walked threw the door alone.

???

c***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 19:25:21 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 19:34:06 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

c***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 19:36:18 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

My, but aren't you the drama queen!

It's been praised by Will and Jim.

I'll throw in my two-cents and say that it beats "Dunce's Father's House" hands down.

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 19:51:24 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

My, but aren't you the drama queen!
It's been praised by Will and Jim.
I'll throw in my two-cents and say that it beats "Dunce's Father's House" hands down.

Maybe you can try for 3 cents: Explain how "he" walked through a door he refused to walk through?

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 19:54:35 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

My, but aren't you the drama queen!
It's been praised by Will and Jim.
I'll throw in my two-cents and say that it beats "Dunce's Father's House" hands down.

Maybe you can try for 3 cents: Explain how "he" walked through a door he refused to walk through?

Hissyfit much?

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 20:00:57 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

My, but aren't you the drama queen!
It's been praised by Will and Jim.
I'll throw in my two-cents and say that it beats "Dunce's Father's House" hands down.

Maybe you can try for 3 cents: Explain how "he" walked through a door he refused to walk through?

Hissyfit much?

I didn't think you could. :)

Maybe the "author" would like to have a shot at explaining it?

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 20:04:39 UTC

Yeah, maybe a lot of things. Then again, maybe not.

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 20:04:55 UTC

Post by Me
I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes that trumped Rachel's 3 liner from decades ago.

Easy there, weasel. Your keeper has already praised it in multiple threads.

Indeed he did as well as I...(one thread)

Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

It's in the last Sampler.

Thank you. I think I've found it. The one that ends
He walked threw the door alone.
???

Oy! Mandias! Duncie caught a spelling error!

Pointing out spelling errors in posts by ASS is like pointing out that there are trees in a forest. Anyway: is "Threw the Door" supposed to be the great poem that's being universally praised?

My, but aren't you the drama queen!
It's been praised by Will and Jim.
I'll throw in my two-cents and say that it beats "Dunce's Father's House" hands down.

Maybe you can try for 3 cents: Explain how "he" walked through a door he refused to walk through?

Hissyfit much?

I didn't think you could. :)
Maybe the "author" would like to have a shot at explaining it?

Hissyfit, indeed!

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 19:57:38 UTC

Maybe, if you're interested in critiquing the poem,
you could find the poem, and critique the poem in
the thread where the poem is posted, rather than
ask someone who didn't write the poem to explain
the parts of the poem that don't make sense to you.

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 21:01:51 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Maybe, if you're interested in critiquing the poem,
you could find the poem
and critique the poem in
the thread where the poem is posted

I don't know where you got that idea, Corey, but if you wish to do a "critique", here's the thread it's in:
https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=en#!topic/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM

Post by h***@gmail.com
, rather than
ask someone who didn't write the poem to explain
the parts of the poem that don't make sense to you.

The obvious explanation is the one I already gave you: that the "author" posted his "poem" without even rereading it. But it's equally obvious the guy praising tbe thing in this thread has some other explanation of his own; so why not ask him in the thread where he's praising it?

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 21:04:21 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Maybe, if you're interested in critiquing the poem,
you could find the poem
and critique the poem in
the thread where the poem is posted

https://groups.google.com/forum/?hl=en#!topic/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM

Post by h***@gmail.com
, rather than
ask someone who didn't write the poem to explain
the parts of the poem that don't make sense to you.

Hissyfit Meltdown!!!

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 19:37:10 UTC

Will sure seems to like it a lot. What's your problem?

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 19:57:17 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 20:00:51 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 20:45:36 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

You do tend to imagine a lot of things that don't happen; I can see it now.

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 20:51:58 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

You do tend to imagine a lot of things that don't happen; I can see it now.

It's in the archives, Dunce.

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 21:10:22 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

You do tend to imagine a lot of things that don't happen; I can see it now.

It's in the archives, Dunce.

Of course it is, dummy Pedodragon: you just wrote and posted it.

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 21:16:14 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

You do tend to imagine a lot of things that don't happen; I can see it now.

It's in the archives, Dunce.

Of course it is, dummy Pedodragon: you just wrote and posted it.

You're Hissy-Meltdown is attaining nuclear proportions!

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 21:26:07 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Will sure seems to like it a lot.

He does? I didn't realize that was a consideration for you, Corey.

Post by h***@gmail.com
What's your problem?

It reads like something someone just scribbled down in 5 minutes, and then posted without even rereading.

Careful, Dunce. I can see the steam coming out of your ears from here.

You do tend to imagine a lot of things that don't happen; I can see it now.

It's in the archives, Dunce.

Of course it is, dummy Pedodragon: you just wrote and posted it.

You're Hissy-Meltdown is attaining nuclear proportions!

And now that's "in the archives" too. Aren't the archives grand?

Will Dockery

2018-01-02 21:06:20 UTC

Post by George J, Dance
Yet none of these 'praisers' can even name it? What's up with that?

The poem didn't have a title, but it was about halfway down the thread of this week's Sunday Sampler:

http://alt.arts.poetry.comments.narkive.com/OAr2YspR/sunday-sampler-12-31-18

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 21:12:11 UTC

Well, there you go, George.
The poem doesn't have a title,
and it's about halfway down the
thread of the Sunday Sampler,
just like Will said!

Will Dockery

2018-01-02 21:17:51 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Well, there you go, George.
The poem doesn't have a title,
and it's about halfway down the
thread of the Sunday Sampler,
just like Will said!
Corey, he's trying to bury the fact that I spit out a poem in less than 15 minutes

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 21:21:17 UTC

Yeah! See, George? Will even posted a link to the poem, twice!

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 21:40:17 UTC

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/ru4KzGwQCgAJ
As with your other poems you've posted, "Me", I refrain from critiquing it, but I sure don't mind the others, Corey, Jim Senetto, Pendragon, reading and commenting on it.
:D

So on December 31, the story was that you were trying to 'bury' the thing - and it turned out to be b.s. Perhaps that's why there's a different story today.

Today's story, which Corey and (perhaps) Pedodragon were insisting on, is that you've praised the thing. However, you clearly say "I refrain from critiquing it," which doesn't sound like praise to me.

Will Dockery

2018-01-02 21:44:03 UTC

So on December 31, the story was that you were trying to 'bury' the thing - and it turned out to be b.s. Perhaps that's why there's a different story today.
Today's story, which Corey and (perhaps) Pedodragon were insisting on, is that you've praised the thing. However, you clearly say "I refrain from critiquing it," which doesn't sound like praise to me.

In another post I did encourage "Me" to keep writing poetry, which would be a far better role to play here than the one he currently specializes in.

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 21:47:25 UTC

Yeah, George! So there! It's just like Will said!

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 22:37:45 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Yeah, George! So there! It's just like Will said!

In which case it's not like you said.

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 22:53:45 UTC

You're simply mistaken, George. I agreed with Will.

Will Dockery

2018-01-03 12:56:45 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Yeah, George! So there! It's just like Will said!

In which case it's not like you said.

Since Corey deleted all his posts, nobody here even knows /what/ he said.

:)

h***@gmail.com

2018-01-03 12:59:06 UTC

Splooge.

m***@gmail.com

2018-01-02 22:11:57 UTC

So on December 31, the story was that you were trying to 'bury' the thing - and it turned out to be b.s. Perhaps that's why there's a different story today.
Today's story, which Corey and (perhaps) Pedodragon were insisting on, is that you've praised the thing. However, you clearly say "I refrain from critiquing it," which doesn't sound like praise to me.

Why do you lie so much, Dunce?

George J, Dance

2018-01-02 22:38:13 UTC

So on December 31, the story was that you were trying to 'bury' the thing - and it turned out to be b.s. Perhaps that's why there's a different story today.
Today's story, which Corey and (perhaps) Pedodragon were insisting on, is that you've praised the thing. However, you clearly say "I refrain from critiquing it," which doesn't sound like praise to me.

Why do you lie so much, Dunce?

Why do you project so much, Pedodragon?

Will Dockery

2018-01-03 00:45:34 UTC

https://groups.google.com/d/msg/alt.arts.poetry.comments/GQzk4oBaPOM/ru4KzGwQCgAJ

Post by Will Dockery
As with your other poems you've posted, "Me", I refrain from critiquing it, but I sure don't mind the others, Corey, Jim Senetto, Pendragon, reading and commenting on it.

So on December 31, the story was that you were trying to 'bury' the thing - and it turned out to be b.s. Perhaps that's why there's a different story today.
Today's story, which Corey and (perhaps) Pedodragon were insisting on, is that you've praised the thing. However, you clearly say "I refrain from critiquing it," which doesn't sound like praise to me.

I also made this post, but not specifically directed at anyone:

Everyone...

Remember to use your spell check option before posting poetry.

Happy New Year to be to all my poetry friends.

😀

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 22:33:54 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Wasn't your question answered elsewhere?
What do you not know that you want to know?

The name of the poem of mine that you supposedly wrote a critique of.

As far as I know, you didn't answer that question yet.

:)

h***@gmail.com

2017-12-31 22:45:01 UTC

Supposedly.

Will Dockery

2018-01-01 00:48:04 UTC

Post by h***@gmail.com
Supposedly.

"Supposedly"?

Was that the name of the poem of mine you say you wrote a critique of?

You must be a psychic after all, since I won't have written the poems titled "Charming" and "supposedly" until well into 2018.

:)

Will Dockery

2017-12-31 23:29:43 UTC

Did you mean the poem was "Charming" or was that the name of the poem, Hi?

I haven't written a poem titled "Charming" yet.

😀

Will Dockery

2018-01-03 02:56:35 UTC

I'm glad we got all that straightforward out.

😀

Will Dockery

2018-01-04 01:28:46 UTC