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Amy / A Poem by Rachel / cheesetray productions
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cheesetray
2024-05-24 07:41:05 UTC
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Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you...


Amy


I loved Amy Schulman
with all my heart
She was the Madriach
for my Jewish youth group
a Labor Zionist movement
called Habonim Dror
and was always there
and led and organized
our meetings in town
during the school year

I was just a kid
age 9 or 10
so I kept my feelings hid
for she was much older
I admired her greatly
though I don't think
she noticed me, barely
but I didn't mind at all
I was young and small
I looked up to her
We hardly even said
two sentences to each other
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance

She was a phenomenal leader
so competent and so pretty
with her own unique mien
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jeans
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb ‒
with those blonde bouncing curls
she looked so naturally cool
it was almost unbelievable
That’s just the way it seemed
She stood out from all the rest
But what I mean is
she was just the best

And it was just so sad
I even cry for her now
when she died suddenly
from a brain aneurysm
Nobody knew
how much it hurt me
how much I looked up to her
though she passed me in years
that did not stop my tears
she was special to me, so true
not even Amy herself knew
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance

Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Director
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committee
I saw her father sitting there
We had had meetings
at their house
and I remembered him
from synagogue, as well
I thought it might be
a nice thing to do
maybe it might mean
something to him, too
to let him know how I feel

He was sitting alone
somewhat sadly
all by himself, in a chair
I went up to him, hesitantly
and introduced myself
to share my secret
I think he may have vaguely
known who I was
I told him
that I knew his daughter
and how she was
so special to me
and it was so sad
that we lost her. Sadly,
I think he's gone now, too

I felt like I was one of the few
on the outside, looking in
I don't know
what it meant to him
He said thank you
but I don't think he really got it
what I see
that she still means
the world to me
It makes me cry
I don’t know why
even as I write
it still cuts right to the bone

I think of her now and then
you might even say often
with a longing in my heart
I don't know what made me
think of this now
I hope it's not wrong
but Amy, as ironic as this sounds
was the bomb. What I mean is
she was just the best

Even all these decades later
my sorrow knows no rest
and the deepest sadness
I keep covered
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance

I know I'll never forget her.


רחל בן–לוי
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”l
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, David
cheesetray
2024-05-24 07:46:30 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you...
Amy
I loved Amy Schulman
with all my heart
She was the Madriach
for my Jewish youth group
a Labor Zionist movement
called Habonim Dror
and was always there
and led and organized
our meetings in town
during the school year
I was just a kid
age 9 or 10
so I kept my feelings hid
for she was much older
I admired her greatly
though I don't think
she noticed me, barely
but I didn't mind at all
I was young and small
I looked up to her
We hardly even said
two sentences to each other
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
She was a phenomenal leader
so competent and so pretty
with her own unique mien
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jeans
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb ‒
with those blonde bouncing curls
she looked so naturally cool
it was almost unbelievable
That’s just the way it seemed
She stood out from all the rest
But what I mean is
she was just the best
And it was just so sad
I even cry for her now
when she died suddenly
from a brain aneurysm
Nobody knew
how much it hurt me
how much I looked up to her
though she passed me in years
that did not stop my tears
she was special to me, so true
not even Amy herself knew
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Director
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committee
I saw her father sitting there
We had had meetings
at their house
and I remembered him
from synagogue, as well
I thought it might be
a nice thing to do
maybe it might mean
something to him, too
to let him know how I feel
He was sitting alone
somewhat sadly
all by himself, in a chair
I went up to him, hesitantly
and introduced myself
to share my secret
I think he may have vaguely
known who I was
I told him
that I knew his daughter
and how she was
so special to me
and it was so sad
that we lost her. Sadly,
I think he's gone now, too
I felt like I was one of the few
on the outside, looking in
I don't know
what it meant to him
He said thank you
but I don't think he really got it
what I see
that she still means
the world to me
It makes me cry
I don’t know why
even as I write
it still cuts right to the bone
I think of her now and then
you might even say often
with a longing in my heart
I don't know what made me
think of this now
I hope it's not wrong
but Amy, as ironic as this sounds
was the bomb. What I mean is
she was just the best
Even all these decades later
my sorrow knows no rest
and the deepest sadness
I keep covered
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
I know I'll never forget her.
רחל בן–לוי
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”l
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, David
faithfully yours,
-cheese
cheesetray
2024-05-24 08:31:53 UTC
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rachel wants to know if you like it/approve "my darling...?"

?

thanks,
-cheese
Golda
2024-05-24 21:22:43 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you..
Am
I loved Amy Schulma
with all my hear
She was the Madriac
for my Jewish youth grou
a Labor Zionist movemen
called Habonim Dro
and was always ther
and led and organize
our meetings in tow
during the school yea
I was just a ki
age 9 or 1
so I kept my feelings hi
for she was much olde
I admired her greatl
though I don't thin
she noticed me, barel
but I didn't mind at al
I was young and smal
I looked up to he
We hardly even sai
two sentences to each othe
I loved her, secretly
from a distanc
She was a phenomenal leade
so competent and so prett
with her own unique mie
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jean
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb â€
with those blonde bouncing curl
she looked so naturally coo
it was almost unbelievabl
That’s just the way it seeme
She stood out from all the res
But what I mean is
she was just the bes
And it was just so sa
I even cry for her no
when she died suddenl
from a brain aneurys
Nobody kne
how much it hurt m
how much I looked up to he
though she passed me in year
that did not stop my tear
she was special to me, so tru
not even Amy herself kne
I loved her, secretly
from a distanc
Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Directo
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committe
I saw her father sitting ther
We had had meetings
at their hous
and I remembered hi
from synagogue, as wel
I thought it might be
a nice thing to d
maybe it might mean
something to him, to
to let him know how I fee
He was sitting alon
somewhat sadl
all by himself, in a chai
I went up to him, hesitantl
and introduced mysel
to share my secre
I think he may have vaguel
known who I wa
I told him
that I knew his daughte
and how she was
so special to m
and it was so sa
that we lost her. Sadly
I think he's gone now, to
I felt like I was one of the fe
on the outside, looking i
I don't know
what it meant to hi
He said thank yo
but I don't think he really got i
what I se
that she still means
the world to m
It makes me cr
I don’t know wh
even as I writ
it still cuts right to the bon
I think of her now and the
you might even say ofte
with a longing in my hear
I don't know what made m
think of this no
I hope it's not wron
but Amy, as ironic as this sound
was the bomb. What I mean i
she was just the bes
Even all these decades late
my sorrow knows no res
and the deepest sadnes
I keep covere
I loved her, secretly
from a distanc
I know I'll never forget her
׹חל בן–לו×
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, Davi
STFU RACHEL YOU MORO


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W.Dockery
2024-05-25 16:15:43 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you...
Amy
I loved Amy Schulman
with all my heart
She was the Madriach
for my Jewish youth group
a Labor Zionist movement
called Habonim Dror
and was always there
and led and organized
our meetings in town
during the school year
I was just a kid
age 9 or 10
so I kept my feelings hid
for she was much older
I admired her greatly
though I don't think
she noticed me, barely
but I didn't mind at all
I was young and small
I looked up to her
We hardly even said
two sentences to each other
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
She was a phenomenal leader
so competent and so pretty
with her own unique mien
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jeans
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb ‒
with those blonde bouncing curls
she looked so naturally cool
it was almost unbelievable
That’s just the way it seemed
She stood out from all the rest
But what I mean is
she was just the best
And it was just so sad
I even cry for her now
when she died suddenly
from a brain aneurysm
Nobody knew
how much it hurt me
how much I looked up to her
though she passed me in years
that did not stop my tears
she was special to me, so true
not even Amy herself knew
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Director
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committee
I saw her father sitting there
We had had meetings
at their house
and I remembered him
from synagogue, as well
I thought it might be
a nice thing to do
maybe it might mean
something to him, too
to let him know how I feel
He was sitting alone
somewhat sadly
all by himself, in a chair
I went up to him, hesitantly
and introduced myself
to share my secret
I think he may have vaguely
known who I was
I told him
that I knew his daughter
and how she was
so special to me
and it was so sad
that we lost her. Sadly,
I think he's gone now, too
I felt like I was one of the few
on the outside, looking in
I don't know
what it meant to him
He said thank you
but I don't think he really got it
what I see
that she still means
the world to me
It makes me cry
I don’t know why
even as I write
it still cuts right to the bone
I think of her now and then
you might even say often
with a longing in my heart
I don't know what made me
think of this now
I hope it's not wrong
but Amy, as ironic as this sounds
was the bomb. What I mean is
she was just the best
Even all these decades later
my sorrow knows no rest
and the deepest sadness
I keep covered
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
I know I'll never forget her.
רחל בן–לוי
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”l
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, David
This is great, I remember the Amy Shulman poem from many years ago,
having a reread now.

And yes, happy belated birthday to old Bob.

😏
General-Zod
2024-06-09 20:42:53 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you...
Amy
I loved Amy Schulman
with all my heart
She was the Madriach
for my Jewish youth group
a Labor Zionist movement
called Habonim Dror
and was always there
and led and organized
our meetings in town
during the school year
I was just a kid
age 9 or 10
so I kept my feelings hid
for she was much older
I admired her greatly
though I don't think
she noticed me, barely
but I didn't mind at all
I was young and small
I looked up to her
We hardly even said
two sentences to each other
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
She was a phenomenal leader
so competent and so pretty
with her own unique mien
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jeans
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb ‒
with those blonde bouncing curls
she looked so naturally cool
it was almost unbelievable
That’s just the way it seemed
She stood out from all the rest
But what I mean is
she was just the best
And it was just so sad
I even cry for her now
when she died suddenly
from a brain aneurysm
Nobody knew
how much it hurt me
how much I looked up to her
though she passed me in years
that did not stop my tears
she was special to me, so true
not even Amy herself knew
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Director
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committee
I saw her father sitting there
We had had meetings
at their house
and I remembered him
from synagogue, as well
I thought it might be
a nice thing to do
maybe it might mean
something to him, too
to let him know how I feel
He was sitting alone
somewhat sadly
all by himself, in a chair
I went up to him, hesitantly
and introduced myself
to share my secret
I think he may have vaguely
known who I was
I told him
that I knew his daughter
and how she was
so special to me
and it was so sad
that we lost her. Sadly,
I think he's gone now, too
I felt like I was one of the few
on the outside, looking in
I don't know
what it meant to him
He said thank you
but I don't think he really got it
what I see
that she still means
the world to me
It makes me cry
I don’t know why
even as I write
it still cuts right to the bone
I think of her now and then
you might even say often
with a longing in my heart
I don't know what made me
think of this now
I hope it's not wrong
but Amy, as ironic as this sounds
was the bomb. What I mean is
she was just the best
Even all these decades later
my sorrow knows no rest
and the deepest sadness
I keep covered
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
I know I'll never forget her.
רחל בן–לוי
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”l
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, David
Quite outstanding of a read.....
W.Dockery
2024-07-17 10:31:33 UTC
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Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
Happy Birthday Poopie!!! Come home soon....Mommy loves you...
Amy
I loved Amy Schulman
with all my heart
She was the Madriach
for my Jewish youth group
a Labor Zionist movement
called Habonim Dror
and was always there
and led and organized
our meetings in town
during the school year
I was just a kid
age 9 or 10
so I kept my feelings hid
for she was much older
I admired her greatly
though I don't think
she noticed me, barely
but I didn't mind at all
I was young and small
I looked up to her
We hardly even said
two sentences to each other
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
She was a phenomenal leader
so competent and so pretty
with her own unique mien
and a perfect figure, in her
form-fitting, well-worn jeans
I know of no better way
to convey it, than to say that
she was just the bomb ‒
with those blonde bouncing curls
she looked so naturally cool
it was almost unbelievable
That’s just the way it seemed
She stood out from all the rest
But what I mean is
she was just the best
And it was just so sad
I even cry for her now
when she died suddenly
from a brain aneurysm
Nobody knew
how much it hurt me
how much I looked up to her
though she passed me in years
that did not stop my tears
she was special to me, so true
not even Amy herself knew
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
Years later, during my first
college break, employed
as Assistant Director
for the National Havurah
Summer Workshop Committee
I saw her father sitting there
We had had meetings
at their house
and I remembered him
from synagogue, as well
I thought it might be
a nice thing to do
maybe it might mean
something to him, too
to let him know how I feel
He was sitting alone
somewhat sadly
all by himself, in a chair
I went up to him, hesitantly
and introduced myself
to share my secret
I think he may have vaguely
known who I was
I told him
that I knew his daughter
and how she was
so special to me
and it was so sad
that we lost her. Sadly,
I think he's gone now, too
I felt like I was one of the few
on the outside, looking in
I don't know
what it meant to him
He said thank you
but I don't think he really got it
what I see
that she still means
the world to me
It makes me cry
I don’t know why
even as I write
it still cuts right to the bone
I think of her now and then
you might even say often
with a longing in my heart
I don't know what made me
think of this now
I hope it's not wrong
but Amy, as ironic as this sounds
was the bomb. What I mean is
she was just the best
Even all these decades later
my sorrow knows no rest
and the deepest sadness
I keep covered
I loved her, secretly,
from a distance
I know I'll never forget her.
רחל בן–לוי
for Mrs. Abraham Zimmerman z”l
Mother of my beloved Shabtai Zisel,
AKA Bob Dylan, and brother, David
Quite outstanding of a read.....
Agreed, this is a keeper.

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