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Fleeting...my friend the world
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Timothy S
2018-02-09 02:23:47 UTC
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it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face

just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend

oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....

my friend



if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
tree-rat-trav
2018-02-09 02:29:39 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
Yeah happy in the way that suicide is happy... there is a conclusion, a weight lifted, finality, release... but it's dangerous to mistake these things with happiness. Love ya bud.
Timothy S
2018-02-09 02:31:27 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
its not about the suicide......thought I wouldn't even have to state that...
drive-by
2018-02-09 02:31:29 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
The speed of it all,
still allows the remembrance of it all
when quiet in thought..
Timothy S
2018-02-09 02:36:47 UTC
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Post by drive-by
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
The speed of it all,
still allows the remembrance of it all
when quiet in thought..
drive by!.....i like that!
drive-by
2018-02-09 02:41:38 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
Post by drive-by
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
The speed of it all,
still allows the remembrance of it all
when quiet in thought..
drive by!.....i like that!
Thank you, Timothy S

Jim
tree-rat-trav
2018-02-09 03:40:08 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
Post by drive-by
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
The speed of it all,
still allows the remembrance of it all
when quiet in thought..
drive by!.....i like that!
i'm aware that it isn't about suicide, I was just saying that calling it happy, or asking for it to be made happy is like doing the same with suicide.
Timothy S
2018-02-09 02:33:10 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
certain people or things can mean the world to you.....oh rat.....you know im bad at spelling .....things....out....😜
Will Dockery
2018-02-09 04:08:37 UTC
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Yes, I do know that feeling, smiling through tears...
ME
2018-02-11 17:05:54 UTC
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I thought I'd bump up some of the new talent here.
Tim S. I hope you'll join the Sunday Sampler again week!
ME
2018-02-11 19:43:15 UTC
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BUMP
Richard S. Oakley
2018-02-11 20:44:46 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
It isn't thoughts
of some suicide
that ties life in nots,
like some matricide
isn't the reason why
I seldom sleep here,
or slipstream so lonely
with my breezy, blown hair.

rICh.
Will Dockery
2018-05-23 22:25:16 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
NancyGene
2018-05-23 23:19:49 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several": "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision". He hasn't posted in a month, though.
drive-by
2018-05-23 23:20:35 UTC
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Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several": "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision". He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Timmy has a tummy ache.
Will Dockery
2018-05-23 23:26:22 UTC
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Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/several

a : more than one
"several pleas..."

b : more than two but fewer than many
"moved several inches..."
Post by NancyGene
"Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a
conscious decision". He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Timothy posted in a Sunday Sampler last time I saw him here, I think.

Yes, Timothy has been gone a while, Travis can probaby bring him back.

:)
NancyGene
2018-05-23 23:34:48 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/several
a : more than one
"several pleas..."
b : more than two but fewer than many
"moved several inches..."
Post by NancyGene
"Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a
conscious decision". He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Timothy posted in a Sunday Sampler last time I saw him here, I think.
Yes, Timothy has been gone a while, Travis can probaby bring him back.
:)
No English speaking person would call three "several".
https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/several

"(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many"

Whatever your definition, he was not here long and did not post much. "Not many" poems.
Will Dockery
2018-05-24 00:18:44 UTC
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Well, I'm quite sure Timothy posted more than three times, anyway.

So, he lost interest with the poetry group... it happens.
Michael Pendragon
2018-05-24 02:04:37 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/several
a : more than one
"several pleas..."
b : more than two but fewer than many
"moved several inches..."
Post by NancyGene
"Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a
conscious decision". He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Timothy posted in a Sunday Sampler last time I saw him here, I think.
Yes, Timothy has been gone a while, Travis can probaby bring him back.
IIRC, he wasn't much of a poet.
George J. Dance
2018-05-24 00:23:38 UTC
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Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several"
Oxford, Merriam-Webster, and dictionary.com all define several as "more than two" but "not" or "fewer than many".
Post by NancyGene
: "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision".
I'm sure he's posted more. I remember one that impressed me at the time; I just searched the above three, and it wasn't one of those.
Post by NancyGene
He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Indeed. Quite a few people that used to post poetry here haven't done so recently.
Will Dockery
2018-05-24 13:49:55 UTC
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Post by George J. Dance
Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several"
Oxford, Merriam-Webster, and dictionary.com all define several as "more than two" but "not" or "fewer than many".
Post by NancyGene
: "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision".
I'm sure he's posted more. I remember one that impressed me at the time; I just searched the above three, and it wasn't one of those.
Post by NancyGene
He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Indeed. Quite a few people that used to post poetry here haven't done so recently.
Indeed, hundreds of poets have come and gone here through the years, some greatly missed... some not.
Will Dockery
2018-05-25 08:26:38 UTC
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Post by George J. Dance
Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several"
Oxford, Merriam-Webster, and dictionary.com all define several as "more than two" but "not" or "fewer than many".
I pointed this out, as well, but the current mode of the trolls now is to try to "shout down" anything, no matter how factual.
Post by George J. Dance
Post by NancyGene
: "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision".
I'm sure he's posted more. I remember one that impressed me at the time; I just searched the above three, and it wasn't one of those.
Post by NancyGene
He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Indeed. Quite a few people that used to post poetry here haven't done so recently.
Michael Pendragon
2018-05-25 11:49:52 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by George J. Dance
Post by NancyGene
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to take
it's all too much for one soul to fake
just remember me
when you feel the breeze
against your face
just be done with me
lets not pretend
my friend
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me....
my friend
if you can, try and make this a happy thought, this is not meant to be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy s
One of the several poems Timothy S. posted here on the poetry group...
We see three, which is not "several"
Oxford, Merriam-Webster, and dictionary.com all define several as "more than two" but "not" or "fewer than many".
I pointed this out, as well, but the current mode of the trolls now is to try to "shout down" anything, no matter how factual.
Post by George J. Dance
Post by NancyGene
: "Lightning Strikes Twice", "It's all too much", "and I have made a conscious decision".
I'm sure he's posted more. I remember one that impressed me at the time; I just searched the above three, and it wasn't one of those.
Post by NancyGene
He hasn't posted in a month, though.
Indeed. Quite a few people that used to post poetry here haven't done so recently.
I suggest you read the brief article linked below:

https://www.writerightwords.com/write-right-couple-few-some-several-many/

There is no set amount for "several," but the implication is that it's significantly higher than three (which number the author would designate with "a few").
Will Dockery
2018-05-24 02:23:09 UTC
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I think Timothy is stronger with song lyrics.
Will Dockery
2018-05-25 11:59:07 UTC
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Timothy made more posts here than three, anyhow.
Michael Pendragon
2018-05-25 12:20:48 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Timothy made more posts here than three, anyhow.
He came and passed like Jesus gas, leaving only a faint olfactory memory behind.
h***@gmail.com
2018-05-25 12:23:49 UTC
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So I would, if I could, write words to make you think fast,
because smarts, like some farts, linger after the stink's passed,
and words that you've heard spell another breath spent.
You can tell by the smell when words are flatulent.
ME
2018-05-25 13:15:47 UTC
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Maybe Tim just posts during his Fleet-ing moments.
NancyGene
2018-05-25 14:46:40 UTC
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Post by Michael Pendragon
Post by Will Dockery
Timothy made more posts here than three, anyhow.
He came and passed like Jesus gas, leaving only a faint olfactory memory behind.
Classical Gas, 3000 Years of Art (Mason Williams)

Now THAT'S a montage. This song plays behind the advertisements for CNN's series "1968: The Year That Changed America" that debuts this weekend.
Will-Dockery
2024-05-12 18:09:37 UTC
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Post by Timothy S
it's all too much for one soul to tak
it's all too much for one soul to fak
just remember m
when you feel the breez
against your fac
just be done with m
lets not preten
my frien
oh, lets not pretend
just be done with me...
my frien
if you can, tey and make this a happy thought, this is not meant t
be sad!....thanks to all that read this simple idea...timothy

Is this the same Tim that Rachel and I recently met

Rachel, check it out


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