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Lemon Stir. by Will Dockery
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Ironywaves
2003-11-16 08:51:09 UTC
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Lemon Stir.

Cones buckets and fog
daylight breezing in with
clouds right on the ground
deep *blue* fog.

Grape stems and seeds
into the night
tossed out the window
while dog watching.

Chunky guitar ringover
green sound drifting
small clicks from behind
a thicket.

Standing near some trees
solid stone
a stairway
table pictures.

Nine times
the picture manifested
in the woodgrain.
Ice coffee and smoke
sunshine and street.

Brightness of God
electric and speaking.
Got a headache
lonesome whistle moan pain.

She has a reptile soul
baby blue brain.
She drives and drives
and sometimes flies.

-Will Dockery (c)2003
Will, what is it with you lemons and women?
up until a few years ago his life was pretty much limited to breathing
and scratching his maggot-infested beard. Poor little Dockery was born
with a brain the size of a speck of dust. The doctors warned him never
to attempt a thought -- NEVER! -- that even a simple thought would be
enough to short and fry his neural circuit. But the thing with Dockery
is that he never listens. You can tell him a thousand times not to
cross-post five hundred messages every week to irrelevant newsgroups,
but he won't listen. So, obviously the Dockery disregarded the doctors'
orders, and ... well, the results were too ugly to describe. Poor guy
spent the eighties and most of the nineties in a coma (not much
different from his previous state, you'll notice, except that he even
lost the ability to scratch his maggot-infested beard at will). Finally
science and technology had developed enough by the late nineties for the
doctors to attempt an extraordinary experiment: they planted and
wired-up a potato inside his head! It was an amazing success; for soon
enough the Dockery was not only scratching his beard, but prancing and
singing around the streets of Shadowville. And why not, right? He had
just acquired for himself the previously umimaginable intellectual
sophistication of a potato! Bang up he went like a step function, all
delirious and happy with new and grand possibilities. 'I'm a poet,' he
wrote, and keeps on writing to this day. To himself, mostly.
As an aside: in the last few years the doctors have conducted with
similar success a handful of other Dockery-style transplants on people
with various vegetables (radishes, tomatoes, celery, etc). And it's
pretty easy to spot these people, especially on Usenet. They're the ones
who think there's any worth in anything that Dockery writes.
heh!

"huh!"

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Maiden of Maddness
2003-11-16 09:15:29 UTC
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enjoyed the poem.








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Ironywaves
2003-11-16 09:24:24 UTC
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Post by Maiden of Maddness
enjoyed the poem.
Thanks, Crystal!
Will

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Post by Maiden of Maddness
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A man hath joy by the answer of his mouth; and a word spoken in due
season, how good is it!-The way of life is above to the wise, that he
may depart from hell beneath.
(proverbs 15:23-24)
Will-Dockery
2024-05-03 13:35:29 UTC
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Post by Ironywaves
Lemon Sti
Cones buckets and fo
daylight breezing in wit
clouds right on the groun
deep *blue* fog
Grape stems and seed
into the nigh
tossed out the windo
while dog watching
Chunky guitar ringove
green sound driftin
small clicks from behin
a thicket
Standing near some tree
solid ston
a stairwa
table pictures
Nine time
the picture manifeste
in the woodgrain
Ice coffee and smok
sunshine and street
Brightness of Go
electric and speaking
Got a headach
lonesome whistle moan pain
She has a reptile sou
baby blue brain
She drives and drive
and sometimes flies
-Will Dockery (c)200
Will, what is it with you lemons and women
Obviously you're unfamiliar with the Dockery's story. Here's th
scoop
Post by Ironywaves
up until a few years ago his life was pretty much limited t
breathin
Post by Ironywaves
and scratching his maggot-infested beard. Poor little Dockery wa
bor
Post by Ironywaves
with a brain the size of a speck of dust. The doctors warned hi
neve
Post by Ironywaves
to attempt a thought -- NEVER! -- that even a simple though
would b
Post by Ironywaves
enough to short and fry his neural circuit. But the thing wit
Docker
Post by Ironywaves
is that he never listens. You can tell him a thousand times no
t
Post by Ironywaves
cross-post five hundred messages every week to irrelevan
newsgroups
Post by Ironywaves
but he won't listen. So, obviously the Dockery disregarded th
doctors
Post by Ironywaves
orders, and ... well, the results were too ugly to describe. Poo
gu
Post by Ironywaves
spent the eighties and most of the nineties in a coma (not muc
different from his previous state, you'll notice, except that h
eve
Post by Ironywaves
lost the ability to scratch his maggot-infested beard at will)
Finall
Post by Ironywaves
science and technology had developed enough by the late ninetie
for th
Post by Ironywaves
doctors to attempt an extraordinary experiment: they planted an
wired-up a potato inside his head! It was an amazing success; fo
soo
Post by Ironywaves
enough the Dockery was not only scratching his beard, bu
prancing an
Post by Ironywaves
singing around the streets of Shadowville. And why not, right? H
ha
Post by Ironywaves
just acquired for himself the previously umimaginabl
intellectua
Post by Ironywaves
sophistication of a potato! Bang up he went like a step function
al
Post by Ironywaves
delirious and happy with new and grand possibilities. 'I'm
poet,' h
Post by Ironywaves
wrote, and keeps on writing to this day. To himself, mostly
As an aside: in the last few years the doctors have conducte
wit
Post by Ironywaves
similar success a handful of other Dockery-style transplants o
peopl
Post by Ironywaves
with various vegetables (radishes, tomatoes, celery, etc). An
it'
Post by Ironywaves
pretty easy to spot these people, especially on Usenet. They'r
the one
Post by Ironywaves
who think there's any worth in anything that Dockery writes
heh
"huh!
http://www.amber-kaye.com/forum/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=199&pid=78


From the archives, a completely forgotten poem of mine, I'll soon ad
to the Shadowville Mythos blog


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