Ironywaves
2003-11-16 08:46:26 UTC
From: Alison M (***@hotmail.com)
Not many gemstones are multicoloured. and you repeated "color" in the
first stanza. Did you mean /through/ a glass?
Its a bit sketchy and kinda spooky but I like it overall.
Will
http://www.amber-kaye.com/forum/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=199&pid=781
Not many gemstones are multicoloured. and you repeated "color" in the
first stanza. Did you mean /through/ a glass?
Its a bit sketchy and kinda spooky but I like it overall.
Scattered In My Memory.
Multicolored like a gemstone
many moods and their color.
Surreal small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
Light flash trough a glass
flaking into the surrounding.
A big house standing grey
a long road that led to it.
Dark winding street
a brick wall and a mound.
Yellow and white crushed brick
scattered in my memory.
Stairway put the route there
to read on that spot.
To listen and learn
like flying through a wind tunnel.
Seperately powered gemstone person
distinct persona and tinted hues.
Like several small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
-Will Dockery (c)2003
Thanks, Alison!Multicolored like a gemstone
many moods and their color.
Surreal small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
Light flash trough a glass
flaking into the surrounding.
A big house standing grey
a long road that led to it.
Dark winding street
a brick wall and a mound.
Yellow and white crushed brick
scattered in my memory.
Stairway put the route there
to read on that spot.
To listen and learn
like flying through a wind tunnel.
Seperately powered gemstone person
distinct persona and tinted hues.
Like several small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
-Will Dockery (c)2003
Will
http://www.amber-kaye.com/forum/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=199&pid=781