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Scattered In My Memory. by Will Dockery
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Ironywaves
2003-11-16 08:46:26 UTC
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From: Alison M (***@hotmail.com)

Not many gemstones are multicoloured. and you repeated "color" in the
first stanza. Did you mean /through/ a glass?

Its a bit sketchy and kinda spooky but I like it overall.
Scattered In My Memory.
Multicolored like a gemstone
many moods and their color.
Surreal small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
Light flash trough a glass
flaking into the surrounding.
A big house standing grey
a long road that led to it.
Dark winding street
a brick wall and a mound.
Yellow and white crushed brick
scattered in my memory.
Stairway put the route there
to read on that spot.
To listen and learn
like flying through a wind tunnel.
Seperately powered gemstone person
distinct persona and tinted hues.
Like several small landmarks
scattered in my memory.
-Will Dockery (c)2003
Thanks, Alison!
Will

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Will-Dockery
2024-05-03 13:35:29 UTC
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Not many gemstones are multicoloured. and you repeate
"color" in th
Post by Ironywaves
Post by Ironywaves
first stanza. Did you mean /through/ a glass
Its a bit sketchy and kinda spooky but I like it overall
Scattered In My Memor
Multicolored like a gemston
many moods and their color
Surreal small landmark
scattered in my memory
Light flash trough a glas
flaking into the surrounding
A big house standing gre
a long road that led to it
Dark winding stree
a brick wall and a mound
Yellow and white crushed bric
scattered in my memory
Stairway put the route ther
to read on that spot
To listen and lear
like flying through a wind tunnel
Seperately powered gemstone perso
distinct persona and tinted hues
Like several small landmark
scattered in my memory
-Will Dockery (c)200
Thanks, Alison
Wil
http://www.amber-kaye.com/forum/viewthread.php?action=attachment&tid=199&pid=78

Another completely forgotten poem of mine from the archives, whic
I'll soon include in the Shadowville Mythos blog


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