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Problems at Salisbury Fair / Will Dockery
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Will Dockery
2015-08-19 08:08:27 UTC
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Problems at Salisbury Fair

Playing a gambit
but still playing it straight.
Sent a fluff-girl downstairs
shaking her pompadour.

Silver badged shadow boxing lady cop,
she carries a gun.
She sits at the piano with a song
tight as a nun.

Clicking her flashlight
working old mimeograph.
We face our reflections
in the city of fishbowls.

Smoking with a journalist
over by the window.
Drinking strange mead
hesitates on delivery.

Working underground
flim-flaming in the fog.
Picking minds
for breakfast couplets.

Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.

Crabbed picture reflects
as she inspects herself.
Winter is rugged
on the frail apple-tree.

Wrinkled man in a snow cap
hip shaking
through Spanish Moss.

She quietly turns and runs,
from a silly basement bar.
Too much fun, it was mostly a waste.

Helped her stagger to her trailer
after drinking beer and sniffing paste.
Some of this and a lot of that
she shakes her tits with tats.

Grinning from the stage
with her over sized dentures.
Clicked her door to the night
shutting out new adventures.

Tight lipped little loser
stapling his chapbooks.

Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.

Clicked his flashlight
asked was it him or them.
Saw the bloody handprint
no flatlander expectations.

One gone before she was born
the other never born at all
they only exist because
she remembers them.

He's wound tight
by she who intoxicates.

The stone bag empty,
Sampson follows the thunder.
Press her hands back
she's flat on her back again.

Kiss the space
her face is open wide.

Stars sparkle bittersweet,
dripping from
these bearded lips.

Boss burbled gobbledegook
chewing treacled tobacco.
He feeds on her mind like a vulture
as she cries out jargon.

Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.

-Will Dockery
matthewerwwin
2015-08-19 08:16:44 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Problems at Salisbury Fair
Playing a gambit
but still playing it straight.
Sent a fluff-girl downstairs
shaking her pompadour.
Silver badged shadow boxing lady cop,
she carries a gun.
She sits at the piano with a song
tight as a nun.
Clicking her flashlight
working old mimeograph.
We face our reflections
in the city of fishbowls.
Smoking with a journalist
over by the window.
Drinking strange mead
hesitates on delivery.
Working underground
flim-flaming in the fog.
Picking minds
for breakfast couplets.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Crabbed picture reflects
as she inspects herself.
Winter is rugged
on the frail apple-tree.
Wrinkled man in a snow cap
hip shaking
through Spanish Moss.
She quietly turns and runs,
from a silly basement bar.
Too much fun, it was mostly a waste.
Helped her stagger to her trailer
after drinking beer and sniffing paste.
Some of this and a lot of that
she shakes her tits with tats.
Grinning from the stage
with her over sized dentures.
Clicked her door to the night
shutting out new adventures.
Tight lipped little loser
stapling his chapbooks.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Clicked his flashlight
asked was it him or them.
Saw the bloody handprint
no flatlander expectations.
One gone before she was born
the other never born at all
they only exist because
she remembers them.
He's wound tight
by she who intoxicates.
The stone bag empty,
Sampson follows the thunder.
Press her hands back
she's flat on her back again.
Kiss the space
her face is open wide.
Stars sparkle bittersweet,
dripping from
these bearded lips.
Boss burbled gobbledegook
chewing treacled tobacco.
He feeds on her mind like a vulture
as she cries out jargon.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
-Will Dockery
Good one. It looks finished for sure.

I especially enjoyed the alliteration.

BTW, I'm not sure if treacled is a word.
Drop the 'd' and it would sound even better.

: )
Will Dockery
2015-08-19 22:03:32 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Problems at Salisbury Fair
Playing a gambit
but still playing it straight.
Sent a fluff-girl downstairs
shaking her pompadour.
Silver badged shadow boxing lady cop,
she carries a gun.
She sits at the piano with a song
tight as a nun.
Clicking her flashlight
working old mimeograph.
We face our reflections
in the city of fishbowls.
Smoking with a journalist
over by the window.
Drinking strange mead
hesitates on delivery.
Working underground
flim-flaming in the fog.
Picking minds
for breakfast couplets.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Crabbed picture reflects
as she inspects herself.
Winter is rugged
on the frail apple-tree.
Wrinkled man in a snow cap
hip shaking
through Spanish Moss.
She quietly turns and runs,
from a silly basement bar.
Too much fun, it was mostly a waste.
Helped her stagger to her trailer
after drinking beer and sniffing paste.
Some of this and a lot of that
she shakes her tits with tats.
Grinning from the stage
with her over sized dentures.
Clicked her door to the night
shutting out new adventures.
Tight lipped little loser
stapling his chapbooks.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Clicked his flashlight
asked was it him or them.
Saw the bloody handprint
no flatlander expectations.
One gone before she was born
the other never born at all
they only exist because
she remembers them.
He's wound tight
by she who intoxicates.
The stone bag empty,
Sampson follows the thunder.
Press her hands back
she's flat on her back again.
Kiss the space
her face is open wide.
Stars sparkle bittersweet,
dripping from
these bearded lips.
Boss burbled gobbledegook
chewing treacled tobacco.
He feeds on her mind like a vulture
as she cries out jargon.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
-Will Dockery
Good one. It looks finished for sure.
I especially enjoyed the alliteration.
BTW, I'm not sure if treacled is a word.
Drop the 'd' and it would sound even better.
: )
You are probably correct... making up new words never goes over so well.

:D
Peter J Ross
2015-08-20 22:45:21 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Wed, 19 Aug 2015 18:03:32 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
making up new words never goes over so well.
You definitely shouldn't attempt it until you learn the meanings of
some existing words.
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
Will Dockery
2015-08-21 12:01:21 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Problems at Salisbury Fair
Playing a gambit
but still playing it straight.
Sent a fluff-girl downstairs
shaking her pompadour.
Silver badged shadow boxing lady cop,
she carries a gun.
She sits at the piano with a song
tight as a nun.
Clicking her flashlight
working old mimeograph.
We face our reflections
in the city of fishbowls.
Smoking with a journalist
over by the window.
Drinking strange mead
hesitates on delivery.
Working underground
flim-flaming in the fog.
Picking minds
for breakfast couplets.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Crabbed picture reflects
as she inspects herself.
Winter is rugged
on the frail apple-tree.
Wrinkled man in a snow cap
hip shaking
through Spanish Moss.
She quietly turns and runs,
from a silly basement bar.
Too much fun, it was mostly a waste.
Helped her stagger to her trailer
after drinking beer and sniffing paste.
Some of this and a lot of that
she shakes her tits with tats.
Grinning from the stage
with her over sized dentures.
Clicked her door to the night
shutting out new adventures.
Tight lipped little loser
stapling his chapbooks.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
Clicked his flashlight
asked was it him or them.
Saw the bloody handprint
no flatlander expectations.
One gone before she was born
the other never born at all
they only exist because
she remembers them.
He's wound tight
by she who intoxicates.
The stone bag empty,
Sampson follows the thunder.
Press her hands back
she's flat on her back again.
Kiss the space
her face is open wide.
Stars sparkle bittersweet,
dripping from
these bearded lips.
Boss burbled gobbledegook
chewing treacled tobacco.
He feeds on her mind like a vulture
as she cries out jargon.
Shakes her Dickinson hair
Strolling by Salisbury Fair.
-Will Dockery
Good one. It looks finished for sure.
I especially enjoyed the alliteration.
This one's also set to music but hasn't been recorded yet... Jack Snipe has
a crackling "Robert Fripp" sounding guitar on it when we do it live, but it
is taking some time to get right, the story, the lyrics, keep progressing
and moving in different directions like jazz poetry of sorts.
Post by Will Dockery
BTW, I'm not sure if treacled is a word.
Drop the 'd' and it would sound even better.

: )
Will-Dockery
2024-07-17 11:15:19 UTC
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Post by matthewerwwin
On Wednesday, August 19, 2015 at 1:08:31 AM UTC-7, Will Docker
Problems at Salisbury Fai
Playing a gambi
but still playing it straight
Sent a fluff-girl downstair
shaking her pompadour
Silver badged shadow boxing lady cop
she carries a gun. T
She sits at the piano with a son
tight as a nun
Clicking her flashligh
working old mimeograph
We face our reflection
in the city of fishbowls
Smoking with a journalis
over by the window
Drinking strange mea
hesitates on delivery
Working undergroun
flim-flaming in the fog
Picking mind
for breakfast couplets
Shakes her Dickinson hai
Strolling by Salisbury Fair
Crabbed picture reflect
as she inspects herself
Winter is rugge
on the frail apple-tree
Wrinkled man in a snow ca
hip shakin
through Spanish Moss
She quietly turns and runs
from a silly basement bar
Too much fun, it was mostly a waste
Helped her stagger to her traile
after drinking beer and sniffing paste
Some of this and a lot of tha
she shakes her tits with tats
Grinning from the stag
with her over sized dentures
Clicked her door to the nigh
shutting out new adventures
Tight lipped little lose
stapling his chapbooks
Shakes her Dickinson hai
Strolling by Salisbury Fair
Clicked his flashligh
asked was it him or them
Saw the bloody handprin
no flatlander expectations
One gone before she was bor
the other never born at al
they only exist becaus
she remembers them
He's wound tigh
by she who intoxicates
The stone bag empty
Sampson follows the thunder
Press her hands bac
she's flat on her back again
Kiss the spac
her face is open wide
Stars sparkle bittersweet
dripping fro
these bearded lips
Boss burbled gobbledegoo
chewing treacled tobacco
He feeds on her mind like a vultur
as she cries out jargon
Shakes her Dickinson hai
Strolling by Salisbury Fair
-Will Docker
Good one. It looks finished for sure
I especially enjoyed the alliteration
BTW, I'm not sure if treacled is a word
Drop the 'd' and it would sound even better
Thanks again Matt


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Peter J Ross
2015-08-20 22:43:58 UTC
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In alt.arts.poetry.comments on Wed, 19 Aug 2015 04:08:27 -0400, Will
Post by Will Dockery
drinking beer and sniffing paste
little loser
Will Dockery
--
PJR :-)

τὸν οἰόμενον νόον ἔχειν ὁ νουθετέων ματαιοπονεῖ.
- Democritus
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