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Ritual Memory. by Will Dockery
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Will Dockery
2003-09-04 09:14:24 UTC
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Ritual Memory.

If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.

This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.

How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.

I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.

I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?

-Will Dockery
blujuju
2003-09-04 20:06:15 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
I like this one, Will.
'Specially that last part.
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blu

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"Reading is one thing. Comprehension... has too many syllables."
Tuesday Knight arw 8.03
Ironywaves
2003-09-04 20:09:10 UTC
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Post by blujuju
Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
I like this one, Will.
'Specially that last part.
--
blu
http://blu-is-back.port5.com
**dark and decadent gfx**
http://biteybits.port5.com
is my homepage
go see why
"Reading is one thing. Comprehension... has too many syllables."
Tuesday Knight arw 8.03
Hey, thanks, Blu!
Will
General Zod
2019-03-30 02:37:44 UTC
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Post by blujuju
Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
I like this one, Will.
'Specially that last part.
--
blu
http://blu-is-back.port5.com
**dark and decadent gfx**
http://biteybits.port5.com
is my homepage
go see why
"Reading is one thing. Comprehension... has too many syllables."
Tuesday Knight arw 8.03
Hey, thanks, Blu!
Will
Right on right on....
General Zod
2019-03-29 21:28:09 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
Okay I found a good stand alone post of this here outstanding poem....
Will Dockery™
2019-03-29 21:52:43 UTC
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Good find, thanks Zod.

:)
General Zod
2019-03-31 21:48:34 UTC
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Good find, thanks Zod.
:)
Right on....
Will Dockery
2019-05-16 21:22:00 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery™
Good find, thanks Zod.
Right on....
:)
Will-Dockery
2024-07-16 05:17:47 UTC
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Post by General Zod
On Saturday, March 30, 2019 at 2:25:48 AM UTC-4, Will Docker
On Thursday, September 4, 2003 at 5:14:24 AM UTC-4, Will Docker
Ritual Memory
If these words of lov
fell into bad timin
put it awa
like a flower in a book
This place has become a valle
all is lost here in the rain
but I am older and wise
and understand the tricks of life
How sadness and soft ligh
are a natural form of life
As is cold rai
in the later part of November
I feel so old yet not wis
foolhardy as the day I was born
Put me awa
I make a better memory
I will not rip it out of her
it is an honest poem
So I will not edit i
why would I even want to do that
-Will Docker
Okay I found a good stand alone post of this here outstandin
poem...
Post by General Zod
Buried in the archives almost sixteen years... astounding
Glad to find it...........
Thanks again for reading and commenting




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Will Dockery
2019-03-30 06:25:38 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
Okay I found a good stand alone post of this here outstanding poem....
Buried in the archives almost sixteen years... astounding.
General Zod
2019-03-31 07:01:58 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Will Dockery
Ritual Memory.
If these words of love
fell into bad timing
put it away
like a flower in a book.
This place has become a valley
all is lost here in the rain.
but I am older and wiser
and understand the tricks of life.
How sadness and soft light
are a natural form of life.
As is cold rain
in the later part of November.
I feel so old yet not wise
foolhardy as the day I was born.
Put me away
I make a better memory.
I will not rip it out of here
it is an honest poem.
So I will not edit it
why would I even want to do that?
-Will Dockery
Okay I found a good stand alone post of this here outstanding poem....
Buried in the archives almost sixteen years... astounding.
Glad to find it............
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