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cheesetray
2024-06-06 21:34:05 UTC
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from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.

if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....

i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(

btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.

beatnik-like stuff.

i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.

it's just druggie crap. :-(((
cheesetray
2024-06-06 22:59:08 UTC
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there's a package on the way, for the holiday.

it was supposed to go out last year, but you know....

a year in the hospital, ha ha. it never ends, right?

somehow i was massively overcharged, i guess it's going super first
class or something.

i suggested to study the outside first, and wait to open it maybe just
before the holiday, so others may be free to celebrate when the time
comes... :)

this is definitely not meant to be your new torah!!! please ignore
me!!!!!!! i'm nuts!!!!!!

auntie annie's bday, either that or the 8th, we were never certain.

she's canadian, too.

aba was the first in the us.

crazy viking, i guess it's hereditary. trace contamination of baltic
genes....probably even more in aba, with his white skin and blue eyes,
blonde at birth...

not guilty by reason of insanity, i guess.

now i don't have a single friend in the whole wide world after that
crazy stunt i pulled, like bob dylan going electric at newport.

does he do this to all his other little bobbie dylan copycats like
me????

i hope you like this new poem i am working on.

again, please, don't forget.

total druggie crap. belongs in the bowels of the beatnik history museum
basement in sf, buried in a dustbin of cultural oblivion
W.Dockery
2024-06-07 23:47:54 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
there's a package on the way, for the holiday.
it was supposed to go out last year, but you know....
a year in the hospital, ha ha. it never ends, right?
somehow i was massively overcharged, i guess it's going super first
class or something.
i suggested to study the outside first, and wait to open it maybe just
before the holiday, so others may be free to celebrate when the time
comes... :)
this is definitely not meant to be your new torah!!! please ignore
me!!!!!!! i'm nuts!!!!!!
auntie annie's bday, either that or the 8th, we were never certain.
she's canadian, too.
aba was the first in the us.
crazy viking, i guess it's hereditary. trace contamination of baltic
genes....probably even more in aba, with his white skin and blue eyes,
blonde at birth...
not guilty by reason of insanity, i guess.
now i don't have a single friend in the whole wide world after that
crazy stunt i pulled, like bob dylan going electric at newport.
does he do this to all his other little bobbie dylan copycats like
me????
i hope you like this new poem i am working on.
again, please, don't forget.
total druggie crap. belongs in the bowels of the beatnik history museum
basement in sf, buried in a dustbin of cultural oblivion
Is this the poem?

I'm working on a new lyric, like a poem.

Not completely pleased with it, either.
cheesetray
2024-06-08 00:17:10 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
there's a package on the way, for the holiday.
it was supposed to go out last year, but you know....
a year in the hospital, ha ha. it never ends, right?
somehow i was massively overcharged, i guess it's going super first
class or something.
i suggested to study the outside first, and wait to open it maybe just
before the holiday, so others may be free to celebrate when the time
comes... :)
this is definitely not meant to be your new torah!!! please ignore
me!!!!!!! i'm nuts!!!!!!
auntie annie's bday, either that or the 8th, we were never certain.
she's canadian, too.
aba was the first in the us.
crazy viking, i guess it's hereditary. trace contamination of baltic
genes....probably even more in aba, with his white skin and blue eyes,
blonde at birth...
not guilty by reason of insanity, i guess.
now i don't have a single friend in the whole wide world after that
crazy stunt i pulled, like bob dylan going electric at newport.
does he do this to all his other little bobbie dylan copycats like
me????
i hope you like this new poem i am working on.
again, please, don't forget.
total druggie crap. belongs in the bowels of the beatnik history museum
basement in sf, buried in a dustbin of cultural oblivion
Is this the poem?
I'm working on a new lyric, like a poem.
Not completely pleased with it, either.
oh hi, sorry, i am just seeing this now.

i already told you all about it, will.

poems and projects are different things, in my book.

it's another short series of decorated notepads.

i finished the last page, did its envelope (its own), then put it in a
protective manilla padded one, small, wrote please do not bend, but then
couldn't resist, as almost always, and decorated the front, leaving room
for mailing stickers, and the back, fully, then protected it with
packing tape, just in case them mailing stickers screwed it up (again),
so they could be peeled off, and then my housekeeper (turned assistant,
top-notch guy), took it to the post office for me (i don't trust asking
it to be mailed from here, too much red tape, might get lost or
something) and was able to get the postal worker to put them on
perfectly.his only "bad news" was that the were put on crookedly, but i
saw the photo, but it's the cool kind of crooked, like slanted...and
nothing was obscured.

i reviewed the outer envelope...i mean, it wasn't as mind-blowing to me
as making the series, but it's still pretty incredibly coherent,
considering i am just using my collections, and it was pretty easy, it
was just.....all there. to the unknowing eye, it just looks like an
envelope nicely decorated with a whole bunch of pretty random stickers.

but nothing could be further from the truth.

y'all know better. :-)

sorry for missing your response until now. i didn't see george's FIRST
COMMENT at first, for a while, EITHER.
W.Dockery @novabbs.com.invalid (W.Dockery)
2024-06-09 05:03:59 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Post by W.Dockery
Post by cheesetray
there's a package on the way, for the holiday.
it was supposed to go out last year, but you know....
a year in the hospital, ha ha. it never ends, right?
somehow i was massively overcharged, i guess it's going super first
class or something.
i suggested to study the outside first, and wait to open it maybe just
before the holiday, so others may be free to celebrate when the time
comes... :)
this is definitely not meant to be your new torah!!! please ignore
me!!!!!!! i'm nuts!!!!!!
auntie annie's bday, either that or the 8th, we were never certain.
she's canadian, too.
aba was the first in the us.
crazy viking, i guess it's hereditary. trace contamination of baltic
genes....probably even more in aba, with his white skin and blue eyes,
blonde at birth...
not guilty by reason of insanity, i guess.
now i don't have a single friend in the whole wide world after that
crazy stunt i pulled, like bob dylan going electric at newport.
does he do this to all his other little bobbie dylan copycats like
me????
i hope you like this new poem i am working on.
again, please, don't forget.
total druggie crap. belongs in the bowels of the beatnik history museum
basement in sf, buried in a dustbin of cultural oblivion
Is this the poem?
I'm working on a new lyric, like a poem.
Not completely pleased with it, either.
oh hi, sorry, i am just seeing this now.
i already told you all about it, will.
poems and projects are different things, in my book.
it's another short series of decorated notepads.
i finished the last page, did its envelope (its own), then put it in a
protective manilla padded one, small, wrote please do not bend, but then
couldn't resist, as almost always, and decorated the front, leaving room
for mailing stickers, and the back, fully, then protected it with
packing tape, just in case them mailing stickers screwed it up (again),
so they could be peeled off, and then my housekeeper (turned assistant,
top-notch guy), took it to the post office for me (i don't trust asking
it to be mailed from here, too much red tape, might get lost or
something) and was able to get the postal worker to put them on
perfectly.his only "bad news" was that the were put on crookedly, but i
saw the photo, but it's the cool kind of crooked, like slanted...and
nothing was obscured.
i reviewed the outer envelope...i mean, it wasn't as mind-blowing to me
as making the series, but it's still pretty incredibly coherent,
considering i am just using my collections, and it was pretty easy, it
was just.....all there. to the unknowing eye, it just looks like an
envelope nicely decorated with a whole bunch of pretty random stickers.
but nothing could be further from the truth.
y'all know better. :-)
sorry for missing your response until now. i didn't see george's FIRST
COMMENT at first, for a while, EITHER.
I think I understand.
General-Zod
2024-06-09 18:56:40 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
there's a package on the way, for the holiday.
it was supposed to go out last year, but you know....
a year in the hospital, ha ha. it never ends, right?
I know from hospitals... the VA was over 6 months in solitude, me and my
fellow Vets....

I got a boot for my bad foot and hoping all to be well in due time...!
Post by cheesetray
somehow i was massively overcharged, i guess it's going super first
class or something.
i suggested to study the outside first, and wait to open it maybe just
before the holiday, so others may be free to celebrate when the time
comes... :)
this is definitely not meant to be your new torah!!! please ignore
me!!!!!!! i'm nuts!!!!!!
auntie annie's bday, either that or the 8th, we were never certain.
she's canadian, too.
aba was the first in the us.
crazy viking, i guess it's hereditary. trace contamination of baltic
genes....probably even more in aba, with his white skin and blue eyes,
blonde at birth...
not guilty by reason of insanity, i guess.
now i don't have a single friend in the whole wide world after that
crazy stunt i pulled, like bob dylan going electric at newport.
does he do this to all his other little bobbie dylan copycats like
me????
i hope you like this new poem i am working on.
again, please, don't forget.
total druggie crap. belongs in the bowels of the beatnik history museum
basement in sf, buried in a dustbin of cultural oblivion
George J. (George J. Dance)
2024-06-07 00:18:28 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(
There's not a lot of people posting here since google groups stopped
carrying it. I know I don't post here often; I just haven't found a good
replacement.
Post by cheesetray
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.
beatnik-like stuff.
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.
it's just druggie crap. :-(((
Your poems are always interesting and worth reading.
cheesetray
2024-06-07 00:42:12 UTC
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Post by George J. (George J. Dance)
Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(
There's not a lot of people posting here since google groups stopped
carrying it. I know I don't post here often; I just haven't found a good
replacement.
Post by cheesetray
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.
beatnik-like stuff.
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.
it's just druggie crap. :-(((
Your poems are always interesting and worth reading.
thank you, handsome distinguished mensa!!

i am still polishing it, and think yesterday is the most accurate date
to put on it.

what are your views on that?
cheesetray
2024-06-07 01:38:34 UTC
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okay, i have to put it away for a few days, to come back to it, with a
fresh clean slate.

it was embarrassing to me even to write it, myself.

but it is no time to be a chickenshit.
cheesetray
2024-06-07 17:18:16 UTC
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it's so hard i have nothing else to do, forcing myself NOT TO LOOK at
the "poem" (what a joke) all day....

i'll finish it tomorrow.

but i need to see it fresh, so I CAN'T PEEK.

ARRRRG!!!!! :)

actually, i DO have that post about voting, and biden

that one is not time-sensitive. even when it's done, i sort of want to
wait for the right time, whatever that is.

when it comes, i'll know.

same as what i did for bob on may 24th (not of these groups)

i waited a long time to know, finally decided bob's birthday was a good
time for action. after having this opportunity for a long time....
General-Zod
2024-07-12 20:23:48 UTC
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Post by George J. (George J. Dance)
Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(
There's not a lot of people posting here since google groups stopped
carrying it. I know I don't post here often; I just haven't found a good
replacement.
Post by cheesetray
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.
beatnik-like stuff.
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.
it's just druggie crap. :-(((
Your poems are always interesting and worth reading.
I agree and second that...!

I have been away for a while so have a lot of reading to do....
W.Dockery
2024-08-07 16:04:02 UTC
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Post by George J. (George J. Dance)
Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(
There's not a lot of people posting here since google groups stopped
carrying it. I know I don't post here often; I just haven't found a good
replacement.
JLA Forums have gotten better.
Post by George J. (George J. Dance)
Post by cheesetray
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.
beatnik-like stuff.
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.
it's just druggie crap. :-(((
Your poems are always interesting and worth reading.
Will-Dockery
2024-08-08 11:22:12 UTC
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Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh...
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-
There's not a lot of people posting here since google group
stoppe
Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
carrying it. I know I don't post here often; I just haven't foun
a goo
Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
replacement
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive countercultur
quality
Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
beatnik-like stuff
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academi
integrity
Post by General-Zod
Post by cheesetray
it's just druggie crap. :-((
Your poems are always interesting and worth reading
I agree and second that...
I have been away for a while so have a lot of reading to do...
Welcome back, Zod




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W.Dockery
2024-07-06 09:00:53 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
from a poem i've been working on since yesterday.
if anybody wants to talk to me, sigh....
i wouldn't blame you if you didn't. :-(
btw, it's trash, the poem. of a subversive counterculture quality.
beatnik-like stuff.
i'm never been further away from writing a poem of academic integrity.
it's just druggie crap. :-(((
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