Discussion:
the thing is...
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cheesetray
2024-07-04 19:50:28 UTC
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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today, for
july 4th....

why?

because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer and reading
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over it's
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used and then
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?)

see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurate date

but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words that were
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for a better
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even more "apt," but
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge.

i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing a newly
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which i
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MAY have
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'T
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'm pretty
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up, off
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the poem?)
cheesetray
2024-07-04 20:02:21 UTC
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what do you think will? (or anyone, zod, whomever....)

cuz i just go one at a time, i mean, i have no idea.

i'm out. :-(((( there may never be another one. this is awful. :-((((((

?????
cheesetray
2024-07-04 20:15:41 UTC
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anybody need a housewife ?
cheesetray
2024-07-04 22:34:20 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
what do you think will? (or anyone, zod, whomever....)
cuz i just go one at a time, i mean, i have no idea.
i'm out. :-(((( there may never be another one. this is awful. :-((((((
?????
hello?

i don't wanna hang onto this thing until halloween.

it would be milked dry and dead by then.....sigh.....
W.Dockery
2024-07-04 22:43:19 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
what do you think will? (or anyone, zod, whomever....)
cuz i just go one at a time, i mean, i have no idea.
i'm out. :-(((( there may never be another one. this is awful. :-((((((
?????
I'm not sure but I do think Halloween might be a long wait.

I have a problem sometimes if releasing a work "too soon" but the
individual poet has to decide when the poem "is ready" to release.
cheesetray
2024-07-04 23:26:37 UTC
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i'm not a poet, i'm a housewife
Will-Dockery
2024-07-05 00:24:59 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure,
DON'
Post by cheesetray
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the poem?
You could post the poem labeled as as "rough draft" today
and possibly have those of us left "workshop" with you

George Dance and Zod are good at that, me... not so much


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%
2024-07-06 18:38:30 UTC
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i'm not a poet, i'm a single housewife
LOL
cheesetray
2024-07-07 01:42:16 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

i think i'm ruining it, trying to make rhymes

because it's only in a verse or two, not the whole thing, so the min
reading it is like, wait, what happened to the rhythm??

it's like mr. tambourin

"and if you hear vague traces of skipping reels of rhyme

just a ragged clown behin

america's last great poet telling everybody that they are shi
compared to him, and telling everybody to ignore them, the faile
copycats

i'm not copying him. i found it myself, in my journals, like hey, tha
looks like a poem...and i liked it. so i got interested, prompting m
to want to take intro to poetry as part of independent study fo
writing, i just wanted to write....and if i could so some poetry
that would be good, too. and like seeing in the bookstore in p'ton
journals of sylvia plath, the writing life, books related to m
interests based on my journaling. (the second sex was in the house
think), a room of one's own, etc...

it wasn't because of bob

but i don't think i had ever seen writing like the hard card to pla
one, that form. so that probably opened that door


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George J. (George J. Dance)
2024-07-05 16:21:32 UTC
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I haven't read the poem. Is "the thing is..." the title?
W.Dockery
2024-07-05 16:33:29 UTC
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Post by George J. (George J. Dance)
I haven't read the poem. Is "the thing is..." the title?
I think Rachel has set the release date for Halloween.
cheesetray
2024-07-06 04:30:45 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking m
computer and readin
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over it'
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?

or connected from a dc tab (looking something up, ahem....


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cheesetray
2024-07-05 00:24:59 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

i don't remember how i wrote it tbexac


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cheesetray
2024-07-05 00:24:59 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

that's a funny suggestion, because at first i did writ
something lik

TITL
TITL
TITLE (etc...?
first rough draft (I hope not!!!!!

no, i want it to be all mine, thanks. :


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Will-Dockery
2024-07-06 04:30:45 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
or connected from a dc tab (looking something up, ahem....
If that's happening, it's not from me


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cheesetray
2024-07-06 04:30:46 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

and some general comments, too

oh, and also to family guy.....i think.....


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W.Dockery
2024-07-06 08:42:10 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today,
for
Post by cheesetray
july 4th....
why?
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer and
reading
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over
it's
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used and
then
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?)
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurate
date
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words that
were
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for a
better
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even more
"apt," but
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge.
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing a
newly
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which i
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MAY
have
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'T
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'm
pretty
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up,
off
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the
poem?)
and some general comments, too.
oh, and also to family guy.....i think..... ?
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
"Another Side" completely liner notes:

https://www.bobdylan.com/albums/another-side-of-bob-dylan/
cheesetray
2024-07-06 04:30:46 UTC
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and some general comments, too
oh, and also to family guy.....i think.....
comments, that is...

i don't think any of them were classifie


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W.Dockery
2024-07-06 08:55:38 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
and some general comments, too.
oh, and also to family guy.....i think..... ?
comments, that is....
i don't think any of them were classified
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
Just coincidence?
General-Zod
2024-07-12 21:07:53 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
and some general comments, too.
oh, and also to family guy.....i think..... ?
comments, that is....
i don't think any of them were classified
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
Hi therre Rachel...!
Will-Dockery
2024-07-13 23:04:58 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure,
DON'
Post by cheesetray
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the poem?
Test post on JLA Forums

Testing..


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cheesetray
2024-07-06 04:30:46 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

no, i changed it

it's coming out sooner

i sent the title to dental river


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W.Dockery
2024-07-06 10:34:28 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today,
for
Post by cheesetray
july 4th....
why?
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer and
reading
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over
it's
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used and
then
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?)
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurate
date
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words that
were
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for a
better
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even more
"apt," but
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge.
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing a
newly
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which i
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MAY
have
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'T
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'm
pretty
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up,
off
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the
poem?)
no, i changed it.
it's coming out sooner.
i sent the title to dental river.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
I didn't realize Dental River aka Barry was still around.
General-Zod
2024-07-12 20:27:24 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today,
for
Post by cheesetray
july 4th....
why?
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer and
reading
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over
it's
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used and
then
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?)
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurate
date
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words that
were
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for a
better
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even more
"apt," but
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge.
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing a
newly
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which i
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MAY
have
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'T
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'm
pretty
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up,
off
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the
poem?)
no, i changed it.
it's coming out sooner.
i sent the title to dental river.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
Of interest....
cheesetray
2024-07-06 04:30:47 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

btw, when i said like LINER NOTES..

i meant the format, and i did NOT remember like, H61R or JWH
seriously was thinking of the the one with cards in it, like hard car
to play, something about jacks, oh, someone said that the other day
didn't put it together, mentioned a one-eyed jack (i don't know card
really, the history/meaning of them ykwim), well, anyway, i certainl
didn't mean 12 FULL PAGES!!!!!!!! sorry


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today,
for
Post by cheesetray
july 4th....
why?
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer and
reading
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and over
it's
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used and
then
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?)
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurate
date
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words that
were
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for a
better
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even more
"apt," but
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge.
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing a
newly
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which i
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MAY
have
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'T
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'm
pretty
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up,
off
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like the
poem?)
btw, when i said like LINER NOTES...
i meant the format, and i did NOT remember like, H61R or JWH i
seriously was thinking of the the one with cards in it, like hard card
to play, something about jacks, oh, someone said that the other day,
didn't put it together, mentioned a one-eyed jack (i don't know cards
really, the history/meaning of them ykwim), well, anyway, i certainly
didn't mean 12 FULL PAGES!!!!!!!! sorry.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=669042925#669042925
I think that poem is on the back of the "Another Side"album.
cheesetray
2024-07-07 01:42:17 UTC
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Post by cheesetray
it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

for some reason, while studying that (the one above t
the post, and then LOL), i experienced deja vu...


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

oops, he didn't want to be looked at, ndh, no
dlb....(the photo on bench

but you know, even then, he seemed kind of familiar. there wa
something about him

honest injun!!

i mean, again, it was even kind of weird, iinm


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

bob, i have two parking spots in the garage for your ca
if you are interested


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

bob only that photo....with a little bit of electrica
energy, wouldn't you agree

i don't think i saw it in any of the other ndh photos, not sure.

same as the ones in biograph

and that one time in dlb, when he was speaking, something about it
this one instance..... the voice, the setting, it was so weird


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

i don't think it was deja vu during DL

cuz i had ND

that grouchy photo....i must have consciously forgotten, cuz anyway
well, first of all, he didn't want to be looked at, DLB, and secondly
i was focused on the latest one, with the guitar, that was the onl
real one to me, cuz it was most recent, NOW, same as how the storie
of concerts, it was like, who cares, it's over. he's in his house wit
a high ceiling, the big empty living room, sitting on his couch bore
and depressed. (i thought

well, at least he was divorced. (phew!


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

sitting in the back of the mini bu

we're waiting for be

i just sat there not knowing what to do , but i understood th
confusio

finally i guess it hit me , to sa

i was about


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it would probably have even MORE of an impact if i pasted it today
fo
Post by cheesetray
july 4th...
why
because it's crazy, it's like y'all are hacking my computer an
readin
Post by cheesetray
it. the poem, using my newly used words, over and over and ove
it'
Post by cheesetray
insane, could be in the air, the words not commonly used i used an
the
Post by cheesetray
out in the dc. (obviously 6 believers?
see, i really wrote it on june 5th, would be besht most accurat
dat
Post by cheesetray
but i've been tweaking tweaking tweaking, but not new words tha
wer
Post by cheesetray
online...i mean, i picked them out with help too, looking for
bette
Post by cheesetray
word or something....not to repeat so much...and even mor
"apt," bu
Post by cheesetray
they were NOT in dc, to the best of my knowledge
i can say with confidence it was all mine, other than borrowing
newl
Post by cheesetray
posted head's up from something that was a big deal to me which
mentioned way before, and thus using this reminder, and also, i MA
hav
Post by cheesetray
been influenced for one letter from will, but i'm not sure, I DON'
THINK SO, BUT HIGHLY POSSIBLE, and then also, there is ONE i'
prett
Post by cheesetray
sure but don't really know, i must have seen it, and picked it up
of
Post by cheesetray
the watery ground... ;) (unless that's backwards)(like th
poem?

but i don't care, that's over, only losers live in th
past

can anybody help me move FORWARD in my life????? marc????

ha ha, camp kadima....


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i'm not a poet, i'm a single housewif
LO
If course it's possible to be both


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