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Deep Blue Sassafras / Will Dockery (Edited by George Dance)
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D***@novabbs.i2p
2020-01-18 05:16:48 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras

You never left:
As another day passes

your love
my love
continues.

You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.

But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,

the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard

that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,

the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,

like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.

-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)

This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Mr Zodiac
2020-01-18 21:51:48 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Will Dockery
2020-01-19 20:35:33 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Tanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.

;)
Mr Zodiac
2020-01-20 06:22:22 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Thanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.
;)
Not a problem, glad to Doc....
Will Dockery
2020-01-25 16:41:47 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene..............!!
Thanks for reading and commenting, General Zod.

;)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-01-26 07:04:38 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene..............!!
Thanks for reading and commenting, General Zod.
;)
One of my favorites....
H***@novabbs.i2p
2020-01-27 21:44:05 UTC
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Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 19 January 2020 20:35
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Tanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.
;)
N. P. Doc.....
H***@novabbs.i2p
2020-02-09 21:11:14 UTC
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Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 19 January 2020 20:35
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Tanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.
;)
Glad to, Doc.... and bes of luck to you with your task today.....
Z***@none.i2p
2020-03-24 05:10:21 UTC
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Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 19 January 2020 20:35
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Thanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.
;)
Not a problem Doc......
Z***@none.i2p
2020-03-24 20:03:24 UTC
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Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 19 January 2020 20:35
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
Thanks for the nod, Zod, and a nod to George Dance for the splendid editing job.
;)
Right on.....
Will Dockery
2020-01-21 02:50:10 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater

Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
ME
2020-01-21 10:37:52 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.

(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Will Dockery
2020-01-21 14:34:51 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.

By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?

;)
Dental River
2020-01-21 20:53:31 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse. Maybe it's best not to parade your family and associates in front of people that already have no respect for you.

Or you can go on like a dying sideshow act that horrifies and entertains us, to the end.
Post by Will Dockery
;)
Z***@novabbs.i2p
2020-01-21 21:33:14 UTC
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Dental River wrote on Tue, 21 January 2020 20:53
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse
Loading Image...

Wow, Barry, that wasn't very nice......
Will Dockery
2020-01-21 23:04:00 UTC
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Dental River wrote on Tue, 21 January 2020 20:53
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Will_Dockery_Jocelyn_Lannom.jpg
Wow, Barry, that wasn't very nice......
That's Barry for you, though.

;)
ME
2020-01-21 23:14:05 UTC
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Dental River wrote on Tue, 21 January 2020 20:53
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Will_Dockery_Jocelyn_Lannom.jpg
Wow, Barry, that wasn't very nice......
That's Barry for you, though.
;)
Sometimes will, the truth just isn’t nice.
Z***@novabbs.i2p
2020-01-21 23:28:18 UTC
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Dental River wrote on Tue, 21 January 2020 20:53
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Will_Dockery_Jocelyn_Lannom.jpg
Wow, Barry, that wasn't very nice......
That's Barry for you, though.
;)
Sometimes will, the truth just isn't nice.
In this case the commentator is obviously biased....
Will Dockery
2020-01-21 23:43:38 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Will_Dockery_Jocelyn_Lannom.jpg
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Sometimes will, the truth just isn’t nice.
When someone like Barry put a negative spin on the truth, even more so.

;)
Mr Zodiac
2020-01-22 05:00:08 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Will_Dockery_Jocelyn_Lannom.jpg
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Sometimes will, the truth just isn’t nice.
When someone like Barry put a negative spin on the truth, even more so.
;)
That Barry, he's such a comedian....
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-12 05:45:38 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Ha ha ha.
(I see you cropped out your cross eyed cousin)
Yes, the un-cropped version is still online, this close-up works best for the above poem.
By the way, you are aware my cousin Jenny was just goofing off for the camera, right?
Your friend Jocelyn Lannon loves to look like she got kicked in the head by a horse. Maybe it's best not to parade your family and associates in front of people that already have no respect for you.
Or you can go on like a dying sideshow act that horrifies and entertains us, to the end.
Post by Will Dockery
;)
Shut up, Barry, just shut up....
Hector Heathcliff
2020-01-24 00:41:57 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene..............!!
Will Dockery
2020-01-24 10:04:54 UTC
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Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene..............!!
Thanks for reading and commenting.

:)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-01-27 04:48:07 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-19 08:15:43 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Quite interesting....
Will Dockery
2020-01-25 15:29:13 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene..............!!
Thanks for reading and commenting.

:)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-01-27 20:22:08 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
Will Dockery
2020-01-28 03:04:39 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it.

;)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-21 01:37:48 UTC
Permalink
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it.
;)
Too much rain here to work on it for a few days....

https://www.facebook.com/Shadowville.AllStars/photos/rpp.11309736351/10155410055476352/?type=3&theater

Is another I would like to do an oil rendition of.....
m***@yahoo.com
2020-02-21 03:36:24 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it.
;)
Too much rain here to work on it for a few days....
https://www.facebook.com/Shadowville.AllStars/photos/rpp.11309736351/10155410055476352/?type=3&theater
Is another I would like to do an oil rendition of.....
Your "paintings" look like they were created by an elephant filled with morphine.
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-21 09:43:46 UTC
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Post by m***@yahoo.com
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it.
;)
Too much rain here to work on it for a few days....
https://www.facebook.com/Shadowville.AllStars/photos/rpp.11309736351/10155410055476352/?type=3&theater
Is another I would like to do an oil rendition of.....
Your "paintings" look like they were created by an elephant filled with morphine.
Since you are an idiot, your opinion means nothing to me....

War Room...!
m***@yahoo.com
2020-02-23 08:22:48 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by m***@yahoo.com
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it.
;)
Too much rain here to work on it for a few days....
https://www.facebook.com/Shadowville.AllStars/photos/rpp.11309736351/10155410055476352/?type=3&theater
Is another I would like to do an oil rendition of.....
Your "paintings" look like they were created by an elephant filled with morphine.
Since you are an idiot,
You certainly are.
George J. Dance
2020-02-21 12:20:20 UTC
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Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
Will Dockery
2020-02-21 20:48:54 UTC
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Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
That sure would be an interesting twist, wouldn't it?

;)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-21 23:58:54 UTC
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Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
He should.... if everyone here would write poetry, this would be a better newsgroup....
m***@yahoo.com
2020-02-23 08:23:07 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
He should.... if everyone here would write poetry, this would be a better newsgroup....
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Both you and Dockery
Should die of the flu
Will Dockery
2020-02-23 08:37:20 UTC
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Post by m***@yahoo.com
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
He should.... if everyone here would write poetry, this would be a better newsgroup....
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Both you and Dockery
Should die of the flu
The Sunday Sampler topic this week is "the end of the world", you should join us.

;)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-19 00:41:12 UTC
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Post by c***@gmail.com
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Very soulful with heartfelt expressions...
I second that...!!
Will Dockery
2020-02-23 08:04:52 UTC
Permalink
Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
That sure would be an interesting twist, wouldn't it?

;)
Will Dockery
2020-02-24 17:49:38 UTC
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Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it, General Zod.

:)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-24 23:14:40 UTC
Permalink
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hector Heathcliff
Post by Will Dockery
Post by Mr Zodiac
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Outstanding poem.....
https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid=10158441765579363&set=a.10150542385934363&type=3&theater
Here's a photo from around the time the poem takes place, those golden days of Yore.
Classic scene, soon to be a Zod painting....!
That's a fascinating plan, can't wait to see it, General Zod.
:)
Indeed, soon it will be finished.....

Number 14....:

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c***@gmail.com
2020-01-28 00:29:54 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Very soulful with heartfelt expressions...
Hector Heathcliff
2020-01-28 07:06:17 UTC
Permalink
Post by c***@gmail.com
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Very soulful with heartfelt expressions...
I second that....
Will Dockery
2020-02-19 04:44:54 UTC
Permalink
Post by c***@gmail.com
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of my poems, for example.
Very soulful with heartfelt expressions...
Thank you for reading and commenting, "carlisaco".

;)
Will Dockery
2020-02-23 19:13:41 UTC
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Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
That sure would be an interesting twist, wouldn't it?

:)
Hector Heathcliff
2020-02-23 22:39:54 UTC
Permalink
Post by Will Dockery
Post by George J. Dance
Post by m***@yahoo.com
an elephant filled with morphine.
Great image. You should be writing poetry for the Sampler.
That sure would be an interesting twist, wouldn't it?
:)
Yes, it would.....!
Will-Dockery
2024-05-19 10:12:39 UTC
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Post by Mr Zodiac
On Saturday, January 18, 2020 at 12:16:49 AM UTC-5
Deep Blue Sassafra
You never left
As another day passe
your lov
my lov
continues
You slee
or you wander
depending on the chosen myth
But thos
deep blue flowers in a box
the color of your eyes
the deep blue flower
I found bloomin
in the lumber yar
that I brought to yo
that summer morning in 1982
the flower
that smelled like sassafras
like you
never leave my thought
day in, day out
-Will Docker
(Edit by George J. Dance
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one o
my poems, for example
Post by Mr Zodiac
Outstanding poem....
Thanks again


This is a response to the post seen at
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=659892187#65989218
General-Zod
2024-05-19 20:45:07 UTC
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Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Post by Mr Zodiac
On Saturday, January 18, 2024 at 12:16:49 AM UTC-5,
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of
my poems, for example.
Post by Mr Zodiac
Outstanding poem.....
Thanks again.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=659892187#659892187
I have become interested in the magical vision properties in
sassafrass...!
W.Dockery
2024-07-11 07:51:18 UTC
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Post by General-Zod
Post by D***@novabbs.i2p
Post by Mr Zodiac
On Saturday, January 18, 2024 at 12:16:49 AM UTC-5,
Deep Blue Sassafras
As another day passes
your love
my love
continues.
You sleep
or you wander,
depending on the chosen myth.
But those
deep blue flowers in a box,
the color of your eyes,
the deep blue flowers
I found blooming
in the lumber yard
that I brought to you
that summer morning in 1982,
the flowers
that smelled like sassafras,
like you,
never leave my thoughts
day in, day out.
-Will Dockery
(Edit by George J. Dance)
This is an example of the editing work George Dance did on one of
my poems, for example.
Post by Mr Zodiac
Outstanding poem.....
Thanks again.
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=659892187#659892187
I have become interested in the magical vision properties in
sassafrass...!
Thanks again for reading and commenting.

😏

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