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Pentagram
2019-10-10 23:23:46 UTC
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Boomtown Memory

Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.

Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.

I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.

Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.

Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
General Zod
2019-10-12 05:43:50 UTC
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
I could use some reads and reviews here folks...….

Just sayin...…..
Hieronymous Corey
2019-10-13 10:11:16 UTC
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Okay.
G***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 14:18:44 UTC
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Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 10:11
Okay.
Okay what, Pastor Corey.....?
Hieronymous Corey
2019-10-13 15:52:42 UTC
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Just okay. That's all. Okay?
Z***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 16:54:39 UTC
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Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 15:52
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Just okay. That's all. Okay?
Just another troll post, Pastor Corey....?
Hieronymous Corey
2019-10-13 16:56:04 UTC
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Okay. Whatever you say. LOL
Z***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 17:02:06 UTC
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Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 16:56
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Okay. Whatever you say. LOL
Why are you trolling in my poem thread, Pastor Corey....?
Hieronymous Corey
2019-10-13 17:03:28 UTC
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I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL
Will Dockery
2019-10-13 17:09:11 UTC
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Post by Hieronymous Corey
I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL
Probably someone who reads and comments on his poem, which you don't seem capable of, Pastor Corey.

;)
Hieronymous Corey
2019-10-13 17:10:46 UTC
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Probably? LOL. Okay.
Z***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 17:19:42 UTC
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Hieronymous Corey wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 17:10
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Probably? LOL. Okay.
Why are you trolling my poetry thread...?
Will Dockery
2019-10-13 20:08:28 UTC
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Post by Hieronymous Corey
Probably? LOL. Okay.
Yes, probably.

;)
Conley Brothers
2019-10-13 20:39:45 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Post by Hieronymous Corey
I said it was okay. What more do you want? LOL
Probably someone who reads and comments on his poem, which you don't seem capable of, Pastor Corey.
;)
The best you have ever offered as critique was "interesting". The best Sulzbach has offered was "Outdamnstanding". Why are you two cry babies sniveling?
i***@gmail.com
2019-10-13 05:11:37 UTC
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
Will Dockery
2019-10-13 07:46:16 UTC
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.

;)
G***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 15:46:19 UTC
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Will Dockery wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 07:46
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.
;)
I thank thee, Sir Doc.......
Bodeen
2019-10-16 00:45:19 UTC
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Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
"Agreed and seconded," as the saying goes.
;)
Ha ha ha...

G***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 14:15:47 UTC
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ibshambat wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 05:11
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
I thank you ibshambat..........
Z***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 21:06:13 UTC
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ibshambat wrote on Sun, 13 October 2019 05:11
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Post by Pentagram
Boomtown Memory
Noise for the sky
shoot that sound upward
from helicopters and trains
from factories and my brain.
Airplanes
in the warehouse
over flowing static
such infamous gifts.
I am strolling
on the edge of the road
outside now
out of society finally.
Excited by
black headlines
newspaper crumbling
near my feet.
Television and commercials
I think of
Paul Verlaine in the rain
tapped with metal.
Excellent.
My last reply to you has been buried by Corey's troll posts, so... thanks again, Ilya S.
Z***@none.i2p
2019-10-13 16:10:18 UTC
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