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Bodeen
2019-10-10 22:58:47 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors

You reflect
on negative zone concepts.

You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.

I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.

You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.

A range within
every seal.

Where the children play
a forest once stood.

Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
General Zod
2019-10-12 05:18:35 UTC
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Post by Bodeen
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Again....

I could stand some comments and critique on this poem please folks...…...
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