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"Gold Like A Broken Ring" / Will Dockery
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Will Dockery
2018-08-07 05:58:32 UTC
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Gold Like A Broken Ring

Crescent moon
on just fresh Autumn
waves lapping
from the river.

Myth and reality at once.
Bon Bon
Good good early chill.
Memory like a haunting shadow.

Sandy blanket
slither of moon
gold like a broken ring
by the river.

Hair caught the light
Bon Bon
bright stars
shining somewhere above.
Lights across the bay.

Movement in the field
under cover of darkness
she says "Don't worry..."
"The woods have predators."

Myth and reality at once.
Bon Bon
Good good early chill.
Memory like a haunting shadow.

-Will Dockery
Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di
2018-08-07 06:13:29 UTC
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Gold Like A Broken Ring
This is quite nuanced, not reading like a cereal box jingle from the Other Site.
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STEPHAN PICKERING / חפץ ח"ם בן אברהם
Torah אלילה Yehu'di Apikores / Philologia Kabbalistica Speculativa Researcher
לחיות זמן רב ולשגשג...לעולם לא עוד
THE KABBALAH FRACTALS PROJECT
לעולם לא אשכח

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Will-Dockery
2024-05-12 18:09:37 UTC
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Post by Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di
On Monday, August 6, 2018 at 10:58:33 PM UTC-7, Will Docker
Gold Like A Broken Ring
This is quite nuanced, not reading like a cereal box jingle fro
the Other Site.
Post by Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di
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STEPHAN PICKERING / "
Torah Yehu'di Apikores / Philologia Kabbalistica Speculativ
Researcher
Post by Chafetz Chayim ha'Yehu'di
...
THE KABBALAH FRACTALS PROJECT
davening in the musematic dar
Thanks to Stephan Pickering, may he Rest in Peace


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