Post by Gilad Timmings The topic will be Adjustment, unless someone doesn’t like that one, then it can be adjusted... -- Gilad
Heh! No, anyone who doesn't like the topic can adjust themselves. Thanks for picking it.
"La Maison Apartment #602" :)
Does that old word jumble have the word ‘adjustment’ in it? Try writing new poetry for a change will. Jim can come up with several new poems everyday while you post the same bs you’ve been posting for decades. Stretch your mind and write something new.
Post by Gilad Timmings The topic will be Adjustment, unless someone doesn’t like that one, then it can be adjusted... -- Gilad
Heh! No, anyone who doesn't like the topic can adjust themselves. Thanks for picking it.
"La Maison Apartment #602"
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Post by ME Jim can come up with several new poems everyday
Actually, most of those poems Jim's been posting are repeats (look them up), but I see nothing wrong with that. ;)
That’s a lie will. He and NG write a lot of fresh, new poetry constantly. And theirs consist of more than just a catchy title. Their poems have substance. And are readable.
Post by Gilad Timmings The topic will be Adjustment, unless someone doesn’t like that one, then it can be adjusted... -- Gilad
Heh! No, anyone who doesn't like the topic can adjust themselves. Thanks for picking it.
"La Maison Apartment #602"
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Post by ME Jim can come up with several new poems everyday
Actually, most of those poems Jim's been posting are repeats (look them up), but I see nothing wrong with that. ;)
That’s a lie will
Absolutely not. You can check for yourself or I can show you what I mean.
Only 2 of them, but since he doesn’t repost his poetry here 50 times a year ,they were new to ME. But you’re unable to write anything new. That takes talent.
Post by Gilad Timmings The topic will be Adjustment, unless someone doesn’t like that one, then it can be adjusted...
"La Maison Apartment #602"
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Post by ME Jim can come up with several new poems everyday
Actually, most of those poems Jim's been posting are repeats (look them up), but I see nothing wrong with that.
I counted more than that just yesterday.
You are NOT deriding someone else for reposting old poems here
No, not at all... just correcting your mistake in thinking they were new poems. ;)
Mr. Dockery, your world of poetry is confined to past conquests and walking around town. They show little in the vast world around you. You're stunted as a writer. Pizza delivery and getting laid does not make decades of poetry.
Post by Edward Rochester Esq. Mr. Dockery, your world of poetry is confined to past conquests and walking around town. They show little in the vast world around you. You're stunted as a writer. Pizza delivery and getting laid does not make decades of poetry.
Mr. Rochester, your poetry runs in a similar pattern of your own navel gazing.
Post by Edward Rochester Esq. Mr. Dockery, your world of poetry is confined to past conquests and walking around town. They show little in the vast world around you. You're stunted as a writer. Pizza delivery and getting laid does not make decades of poetry.
Mr. Rochester, your poetry runs in a similar pattern of your own navel gazing.
Actually, it's quite the opposite. Jim's poetry is usually based on his observations of others.
Post by ME Jim can come up with several new poems everyday
Perhaps so, but I'm sure Mr. Rochester will not deny that most of the poetry he's posted here have been repeats. Again, not that I have any problem with that.
You're evading the point.
ME challenged you to compose a *NEW* poem for the upcoming Sunday Sampler (as opposed to finding a way to plug the word "adjustment" into a poem you'd written 20 years ago).
Post by NancyGene We hope that it is not in your boilerplate style of fragments, more fragments and a general wandering eye.
As always, if my poetry isn't of interest to you, please feel free to skip and ignore it. ;)
Since we compile the official SS poetry list, it is impossible to skip and ignore your poems. We would think that you would want to put your best effort forward for the Sunday Sampler, which would include polishing it, rereading and revising it, and making sure that it makes sense, has a point, and is actual poetry.
Post by Gilad Timmings The topic will be Adjustment, unless someone doesn’t like that one, then it can be adjusted... -- Gilad Heh! No, anyone who doesn't like the topic can adjust themselves. Thanks for picking it.
Of course they can always whine about it all day like they're doing here today.