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Grey Matter Melody
2016-10-26 23:36:37 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors

You reflect
on negative zone concepts.

You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.

I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.

You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.

A range within
every seal.

Where the children play
a forest once stood.

Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Richard Oakley
2016-10-27 08:03:51 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Will Dockery
2016-10-27 11:12:17 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Seems to me the person he is writing to is the "negative zone mirror", as the first line states.
Good Time Charley
2018-10-31 07:31:50 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Seems to me the person he is writing to is the "negative zone mirror", as the first line states.
Thank Yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh………….
Search Group Solutions
2016-10-27 21:26:12 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
He reflects the negative urges of his followers.
Richard Oakley
2016-10-27 22:28:18 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
He reflects the negative urges of his followers.
Will Dockery
2016-10-28 14:30:30 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Also, the Negative Zone is the Fantastic Four version of Superman's Phantom Zone, where the really bad criminals are exiled.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negative_Zone

The Negative Zone is a fictional setting, an antimatter universe depicted in publications from Marvel Comics, most frequently in Fantastic Four and Captain Marvel. Created by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby, it first appeared in Fantastic Four #51 (June 1966).
Will Dockery™
2019-03-29 14:33:37 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Also, the Negative Zone is the Fantastic Four version of Superman's Phantom Zone, where the really bad criminals are exiled.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negative_Zone
The Negative Zone is a fictional setting, an antimatter universe depicted in publications from Marvel Comics, most frequently in Fantastic Four and Captain Marvel. Created by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby, it first appeared in Fantastic Four #51 (June 1966).
Of course, to follow up, the comics character "General Zod" is actually from the Phantom Zone:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phantom_Zone

"The Phantom Zone is a fictional prison dimension appearing in American comic books published by DC Comics, commonly in association with stories featuring Superman. It first appeared in Adventure Comics #283 (April 1961), and was created by Robert Bernstein and George Papp..."
General Zod
2019-03-29 21:43:09 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Also, the Negative Zone is the Fantastic Four version of Superman's Phantom Zone, where the really bad criminals are exiled.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negative_Zone
The Negative Zone is a fictional setting, an antimatter universe depicted in publications from Marvel Comics, most frequently in Fantastic Four and Captain Marvel. Created by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby, it first appeared in Fantastic Four #51 (June 1966).
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phantom_Zone
"The Phantom Zone is a fictional prison dimension appearing in American comic books published by DC Comics, commonly in association with stories featuring Superman. It first appeared in Adventure Comics #283 (April 1961), and was created by Robert Bernstein and George Papp..."
I thank thee.....
High Number
2019-08-19 23:27:15 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Also, the Negative Zone is the Fantastic Four version of Superman's Phantom Zone, where the really bad criminals are exiled.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Negative_Zone
The Negative Zone is a fictional setting, an antimatter universe depicted in publications from Marvel Comics, most frequently in Fantastic Four and Captain Marvel. Created by Stan Lee and Jack Kirby, it first appeared in Fantastic Four #51 (June 1966).
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phantom_Zone
"The Phantom Zone is a fictional prison dimension appearing in American comic books published by DC Comics, commonly in association with stories featuring Superman. It first appeared in Adventure Comics #283 (April 1961), and was created by Robert Bernstein and George Papp..."
That is of course the standard version........

Will Dockery
2017-02-11 17:08:29 UTC
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Sorry about not quoting...

The type and keyboard are difficult enough to operate as is..

I need one of those tools to tap the Keys with...
Richard Oakley
2017-02-11 19:07:49 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Sorry about not quoting...
The type and keyboard are difficult enough to operate as is..
I need one of those tools to tap the Keys with...
Hello, and no worries
You'll get there.
Will Dockery
2017-02-11 20:37:28 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Sorry about not quoting...
The type and keyboard are difficult enough to operate as is..
I need one of those tools to tap the Keys with...
Hello, and no worries
You'll get there.
I think I will, relatively soon, Richard...

I now have three mobile devices of different styles, so I'll be getting the feel more and more...
Major Liberty
2018-10-27 21:44:14 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
You seen Superman?
General Zod
2019-03-16 21:45:23 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
It is where general Zod was trapped.....
Poetry Dude
2019-04-05 08:15:22 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Where General Zod lived.....
Will Dockery™
2019-04-05 15:32:57 UTC
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Post by Richard Oakley
Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Where General Zod lived.....
Actually, Zod was in the "Phantom Zone":

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phantom_Zone

"General Zod - A Kryptonian military general who was exiled to the Phantom Zone after trying to overthrow the Kryptonian Council so he could take over Krypton..."
Poetry Dude
2019-04-05 21:19:52 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Where General Zod lived.....
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phantom_Zone
"General Zod - A Kryptonian military general who was exiled to the Phantom Zone after trying to overthrow the Kryptonian Council so he could take over Krypton..."
I stand corrected......



General Zod gets banished to the Phantom Zone
Rex Hunter Jr.
2019-08-16 06:04:45 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
What's a 'negative zone' and where is the 'mirror', besides in the title?
Hello Richard.....
b***@gmail.com
2016-10-28 21:31:05 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Depressing slop, why not look for the higher purpose in your verse?
Will Dockery
2016-10-29 01:11:18 UTC
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Why not post your poetry, Bosl... Show us how it should be.

😀
General Zod
2018-10-22 04:39:18 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Depressing slop, why not look for the higher purpose in your verse?
You is crazy...……………….
Will Dockery
2019-03-30 06:35:20 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Depressing slop, why not look for the higher purpose in your verse?
You is crazy...……………….
Heh...
Zod
2018-10-30 19:43:44 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Depressing slop, why not look for the higher purpose in your verse?
You crazy....
Will Dockery
2016-10-31 03:58:22 UTC
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All that considered, I really kind of preferred the basics of Superman's Phantom Zone over the more cluttered Marvel version.
Search Group Solutions
2016-11-03 03:03:03 UTC
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I was thinking of Super Man more than those others but I was attempting to be more original.
Will Dockery
2016-11-03 04:40:40 UTC
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Easy to get confused over, I reckon.
George John
2016-11-21 22:46:03 UTC
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Easy to get confused over, I reckon.
The original General Zod and his two friends, now that was some great villany.
Will Dockery
2016-11-22 02:49:50 UTC
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Yeah, Superman II was a great film.
John George III
2016-11-23 00:39:19 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Yeah, Superman II was a great film.
Who was the chick who played Zod's female sidekick, I really did like her.
Will Dockery
2016-11-23 03:15:41 UTC
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I forgot her name, and can't remember the other guy either, who played Jaws in the James Bond movies.
John George III
2016-11-23 04:55:25 UTC
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Need to look her up she was tough and HOT!
Will Dockery
2016-11-23 06:40:04 UTC
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I did know her name, she was a little bit famous back then, 40 years ago.
Will Dockery
2016-11-23 13:29:51 UTC
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Okay, you're making me curious... I'll look the actress up this morning.
Will Dockery
2016-11-25 11:35:11 UTC
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Yeah, Superman II was a great film.
Who was the chick who played Zod's female sidekick, I really did like her.
Sarah Douglas played Ursa in Superman II, here is her Facebook page:

https://www.facebook.com/pages/Sarah-Douglas/108652872492910

"Sarah Douglas is a British actress. She is perhaps best known for playing the Kryptonian supervillain Ursa in Superman and Superman II . Her other prominent roles include that of the evil Queen Taramis in the 1984 film Conan the Destroyer, and Pamela Lynch in the 1980s primetime drama series Falcon Crest..."
Richard Oakley
2016-11-25 14:10:29 UTC
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i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
words that stress no sense:
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
Will Dockery
2016-11-25 16:52:54 UTC
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He gave it all up for a walk with Margot.
Will Dockery
2016-11-25 17:03:03 UTC
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i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
Went to Desktop Mode here to comment on this one.

A beauty of a poem...

But is it meant to relate, comment on, or respond specifically to my poem?

And if so...

How so?
Will Dockery
2016-11-25 17:05:41 UTC
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i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
Excellent poem, but what I was asking was is it mean to relate to the original poem posted in this thread?
Richard Oakley
2016-11-25 17:53:55 UTC
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i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
Excellent poem, but what I was asking was is it mean to relate to the original poem posted in this thread?
apart from the sky as a mirror? nothing.
Will Dockery
2016-11-25 19:54:16 UTC
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Post by Richard Oakley
i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
Excellent poem, but what I was asking was is it mean to relate to the
original poem posted in this thread?
apart from the sky as a mirror? nothing.

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The entrance to the Negative Zone, the other side of the mirror... okay, I
get it now.
Richard Oakley
2016-11-26 14:46:54 UTC
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i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."
A streamer, dragged behind a plane, says 'i love you' on it, you read it aloud, it issues out like an eddict, with little thoughts as it's purely about 'matters of the heart'.
Will Dockery
2016-11-26 16:09:54 UTC
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Nice morning poetics, Richard.

Sunny and bright out here, digging the sidewalk scene of Saturday shoppers.

😎
Will Dockery
2016-11-29 14:12:32 UTC
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"Richard Oakley" wrote in message news:07bdbcf6-a947-4987-9ff2-***@googlegroups.com...

i scanned the sky
streamer that spoke
by my mouth
about
issues that sound out
words that stress no sense:
they're matters of the heart...
it said, "i love you."

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A beauty, thanks for the perspective, Richard.
Sulzbach Services
2016-11-30 05:07:47 UTC
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Not bad a all Richard. ..
Will Dockery
2016-11-30 22:56:10 UTC
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Post by Sulzbach Services
Not bad a all Richard. ..
His OB Poem?

Agreed.
Will Dockery
2016-11-26 17:19:05 UTC
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This is a fascinating new filter...

https://dreamdeeply.com/?t=shadowville#agallery

Dream deeply

"This is web interface for Google Deep Dream. Do computers dream? Of course
they do. Have you ever wondered how that might look? Thanks to Google Deep
Dream that just went open source, we can all now use our own photos and see
for ourselves. Have fun!

Provide us your email so we can send you url to your dream as soon as it's
ready or leave it empty if you wish to wait for the process to finish.
Computers can dream for lengthy periods of time and the longer they sleep,
the crazier their dreams become..."
George John III
2016-11-27 06:45:19 UTC
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That is her!
Will Dockery
2016-11-27 08:04:02 UTC
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Sarah Douglas...

Still a dark beauty.
George John III
2016-11-28 17:39:03 UTC
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Sarah Douglas...
Still a dark beauty.
I'd like to see that Conan movie now.
Will Dockery
2016-11-30 22:58:22 UTC
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Sarah Douglas...
Still a dark beauty.
I'd like to see that Conan movie now.
Yes, it would probably be on DVD or on the old movies channels sometime
soon.
e***@yahoo.com
2016-11-22 00:11:33 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
This one reaches for that unspoken truth.
Will Dockery
2016-11-24 14:15:46 UTC
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Okay, Ursa was played by Sarah Douglas, who seems to be alive, well, and has a fan following. If i can make this link post on this iPad, I have her fan website.

No, I don't see how to paste a link here in the bizarro iPad universe... Richard Oakley, are you out there?

Can you tell me the probably simple trick to copy and pasting a link here?

I'm not getting it on my own.

😇
Will Dockery
2016-11-26 10:50:03 UTC
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Bottom line, outstanding work.
Samsung Experience
2016-12-01 01:15:22 UTC
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Keeping on keeping on.
Will Dockery
2016-12-01 04:10:49 UTC
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That's about the most anyone can do.
Sulzbach Services
2016-12-01 05:17:09 UTC
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And of course keep taking notes on the madness.
Will Dockery
2016-12-01 09:39:50 UTC
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Post by Sulzbach Services
And of course keep taking notes on the madness.
Tales of ordinary madness, Buk called them.
General Zod
2017-02-10 00:14:43 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
For Richard!!!
Richard Oakley
2017-02-11 14:40:34 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
For Richard!!!
Thanks.
Will Dockery
2017-02-11 17:05:59 UTC
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Hello RICHARD!
General Zod
2017-02-11 22:28:47 UTC
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Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
For Richard!!!
Thanks.
GLAD you did like, Mortal!



Wonderful trip back to the sound that defined 1985...
Will Dockery
2017-02-11 23:42:55 UTC
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Getting a little bit delusional G.J?
Will Dockery
2017-02-11 11:55:42 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
One of my favorite poems of yours.
General Zod
2017-03-03 22:44:07 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
The life of Zod....

A poem for Corry..........
b***@gmail.com
2017-03-04 01:50:16 UTC
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Thanks. ..
Will Dockery
2017-03-04 04:00:50 UTC
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One of my favorite poems by you.

Kind of like the origin of General ZOD.

:)
General Zod
2017-03-04 04:46:58 UTC
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Thanks again this is mostly correct...
Will Dockery
2017-03-04 05:20:06 UTC
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Interesting mythology.
General Zod
2017-03-04 07:09:27 UTC
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Superman comics or my own myths?
Will Dockery
2017-03-04 07:54:02 UTC
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Post by General Zod
Superman comics or my own myths?
That's a good question...
Will Dockery
2017-03-04 18:45:39 UTC
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Your incorporation of the General Zod comics into your own personal myth I reckon.
Mr. Spacey
2018-10-09 23:40:45 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Thank you thank you hold the applause.....
Will Dockery
2018-10-14 05:34:54 UTC
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This thread contains some of that critique I mentioned, Zod.
Mr. Spacey
2018-10-15 06:10:56 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Okay now I see...……….
Will Dockery
2018-10-18 01:02:04 UTC
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I'll expand on it shortly... on the mobile gizmo right now.

😀
Will Dockery
2018-10-19 03:59:20 UTC
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I'll expand on it shortly...

On the mobile gizmo right now.

😀
General Zod
2018-10-21 06:43:59 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Thank yuh all you too kind...……………….
Will Dockery
2019-03-16 05:42:21 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Thank yuh all you too kind...……………….
Good poem, as I stated earlier...
Will Dockery
2018-10-22 19:54:31 UTC
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One of your finest poems, keep up the great work, Zod.?
m***@gmail.com
2018-10-22 20:12:48 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
One of your finest poems, keep up the great work, Zod.?
Slurp.
Will Dockery
2019-03-17 20:00:06 UTC
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One of your finest poems, keep up the great work, Zod.

:)
Major Liberty
2018-10-26 04:24:44 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
One of your finest poems, keep up the great work, Zod.?
Thank
General Zod
2018-10-22 21:03:19 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Thanks yuhs for comment...............
Will Dockery
2018-10-31 19:35:28 UTC
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Good use of POP culture mythology.
Good Time Charley
2018-11-04 06:47:03 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
I thank thee...…………..
General Zod
2018-11-13 07:28:55 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Feed back and suggestions happily wanted please...........
c***@gmail.com
2018-11-14 00:32:13 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Very mysterious poetry.
Good Time Charley
2018-11-24 04:44:44 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
Very mysterious poetry.
Thank yuh....
General Zod
2019-04-15 02:14:32 UTC
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Post by Grey Matter Melody
Negative Zone Mirrors
You reflect
on negative zone concepts.
You are just about evil
with your smiling face
and great favors.
I stand firm
on an eternal death.
Standing firm
in that conviction.
You have
polluted the world
with more
than just garbage.
A range within
every seal.
Where the children play
a forest once stood.
Make a little list
of the vanished
as it floats
silently by me.
I shall keep the title as is though.....
Will Dockery
2019-04-15 02:32:03 UTC
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Since it relates to your own personal mythos it works.
Rex Hunter Jr.
2019-08-13 04:11:03 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Since it relates to your own personal mythos it works.
I thank ye Doc....
Rex Hunter Jr.
2019-08-13 23:33:51 UTC
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Post by Will Dockery
Since it relates to your own personal mythos it works.


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